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Dear Friend, October 10
I can’t put your name here well because they are watching me. I have no choice but to kill myself. What am I suppose to do? Everything here sucks. They hurt us and they don’t feed us. Don’t come here, they lie. They only want money so they tell people that this school is the greatest in the universe, but trust me its not. Life here is worse than ever before. Don’t come here, since well you have a family and kind ones too. Look my foster family put me here so I could suffer; they know the owner so she put me here for free. I don’t understand if they wanted a child aren’t they suppose to take care of them. I guess I won’t be writing to you any more ……………..Well remember to stay safe and close to your family, and tell them to never send you to a private school. About me is worse than ever. I’m starving and my clothes are ripped from being beaten up. Well you could say that everybody hates me and beats me all the time. Don’t bother writing back; I never learned to read here. They only taught us to write words and their meanings. So I won’t be able to read them. Bye…………. I know that I miss you so much. I know your doing great and don’t bother trying to save me; my foster mom put a secret seal on my adoption form.
Bye
Sarah
Dear Sarah, November 27
We are going to rescue you……. No buts and remember these words:
Hold on…………Don’t give up………Be brave………Have hope…….(and) remember…….
These words will follow you for the rest of your life. If you repeat them everyday. We will come. In time, I know that you could hold on. Remember these words are not just words they’re magical.
Bye
Quhaku
P.S. Will be there by December
Dear Friend, December 1
I didn’t read your letter, but I know it was good news by the way they reacted when they stole it from me. I told you I’m powerless and useless. Sorry.. I just know they punished me for something I never done…………..
This is good-bye forever……….
Sarah
P.S…………………I always loved you with all my heart…………………
Dear Sarah, January 14
Sarah remember those words I told you when we were little, repeat those words. Sorry for every thing……………
Quhaku
P.S. …………………..I always loved you too…………..
Dear Friend, February 17
I remember. Why? Friend could you do me a favor…..Stop writing to me!!!!!!!!!They are getting mad. If you don’t stop they will send to another private school much worse than this one. Right now I’m crying my eyes out. You don’t understand anything of this……….
Bye
Sarah
P.S.. I’m sorry………..
(To be continued)
- by 2009 helper |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/11/2008 |
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- Title: Prison
- Artist: 2009 helper
- Description: A love story that will make u cry. If u want me to add something then send a message. Thanks for reading. see my nexty one!
- Date: 08/11/2008
- Tags: fairytale love romance hate friendship
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Comments (3 Comments)
- the dark angel of fire - 11/28/2008
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- Dark_Solar_Wolf - 08/11/2008
- Wow. Seriously... wow. You could've done so much more with this. I agree with the person below me... writing but not being able to read just doesn't make sense. As a matter of fact, if you can't read then how are you supposed to know what you're writing? Anyways, I suppose it was ok. 3/5.
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- The Goddess Eclaire - 08/11/2008
- It would be better if it had some modicum of believability. such as teaching you to write without being able to read, not really possible unless you are the thickest person in existence.
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