- coda was relaxing out in the court yard sitting on the rim of the granite fountain which looked like a horse rearing back while the water flowed around its feet. A group of students went by and where deep in conversation when one accidently bumped into coda sending coda into the fountain. “o god I’m sorry let me help you out.” Said the student as he reached down and yanked coda out of the fountain and onto dry ground. “O man I’m so sorry do you need anything.” Said the student in a apologetic tone. “No man I’m good I can take care of a little water.” Said coda as he made a hand sign and the water seemed to slide off him all at once. “See no harm. Said coda as he patted the student on the back and resumed his peaceful stance on the rim. Just as coda started to relax again he felt a push and suddenly he was back in the fountain. “what the hell!” yelled coda as he got up then coda suddenly noticed the water was growing cold before he knew it his bottom half of his body was frozen in the fountain and a smug mage stood in his fancy blue robes. “I think you look better with the washed up look.” Laughed the mage. “Sueling you little p***k long time no see. what ran out of small children and animals to torment.” Said coda as he tried to wiggle out of the ice. “How could I have run out of small children coda your still here?” Said sueling knowing he hit one of coda’s sore spots. “You arrogant wind bag I bet if I wasn’t stuck in this ice you wouldn’t have nearly as much gall as you do now.” Said coda as he continued his struggle against the ice around his knees. “Fine then coda bring it on.” Said sueling as he let the water return to its original liquid form. “Big mistake!” yelled coda as he got out of the fountain and started towards sueling then fell over. “Yeah with how cold that ice was your legs are probably close to useless.” As sueling walked up and picked coda up by his collar. “Sueling put him down now!” sueling looked over to see Kochi nearby. “What if I don’t.” said sueling with a smirk. “I swear sueling if you do even the smallest thing to him I’ll take out his mine and a generations worth of vengeance on you.” Kochi said with a roar filled with authority. “I doubt it, and I’ll prove it.” Said sueling as he engulfed his hand ion lightning then zapped coda with a loud crackle of electricity then tossed him to the ground. “I knew it your all talk…” sueling said until Kochi delivered a punch to his jaw with a resounding snap. Kochi then grabbed Sueling’s back with one hand and started to punch him in the stomach with the other hand. Kochi threw sueling into the air then brought a lightning bolt down on him from the sky and as sueling fell down Kochi delivered a kick to his stomach then went to coda’s side. “Brother are you ok.” Said Kochi. “Get off me Kochi I’m fine.” Coda said as he pushed Kochi away and slowly got up to his feet. “Did you get him for me kochi.” Said coda. “Yeah you don’t have to worry.” Said Kochi. “Now I wouldn’t go that far.” Kochi turned around to see sueling standing a small trickle of blood coming out of his mouth. “Sueling you lost let it die.” Said Kochi. “No I didn’t I won’t get back here and face me!” Yelled sueling as he picked up a broken piece of mortar and hit Kochi in the back of the head with it. “You want a fight sueling you just got one.” Said Kochi as he let his brother get at a safe distance then it began. Sueling cast out a bolt of lightning. Kochi slapped the lightning away and tossed a couple fireballs back. Sueling dodge but still caught one in the shoulder. Kochi created a wall of fire and began to tighten it around his body till it was a second skin of pure red inferno. Sueling threw out a few more bolts of lightning at Kochi as he slowly backed off. Kochi in his new fiery armor easily diverted the lightning and shot a torrent of fire at sueling. Sueling put his hands out and a torrent of water came out just as big as the torrent of fire. As the two blasts hit a large cloud of steam engulfed the courtyard. “Die!” yelled sueling as suddenly the stem encircled Kochi and his flame suit and as the mist thickened Kochi’s suit of fire began to die. Soon Kochi was drowning in a cell of standing water.
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- | Submitted on 08/30/2008 |
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- Title: kochi's courtyard fight
- Artist: blind-hawks-master
- Description: this is another small piece of my ongoing story project far roots enjoy
- Date: 08/30/2008
- Tags: project roots kochi fight
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Comments (3 Comments)
- straight up Guy - 09/01/2008
- i liked it it was creative but it would've been easier to read if you had paragraphs and more people might read it but over all good job.
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- Eternal Complex - 09/01/2008
- no bad, but needs work ^^
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- Pouncequick - 08/31/2008
- Break up your wall of text into paragraphs. If you take a little time to format it, others will be more likely to take the time to read it and comment
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