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Darkness is all I see,
is it really there?
Come and walk with me
I'm tired of this loneliness
of this air I can not breath.
Fake a smile, and cry alone!
That's my theme my last word..
Black memories hunt my heart.
I want to scream and cry.
punch you really hard and laugh outloud
but you don't deserve this, is not your fault
whatever happened to me you didn't know.
You didn't know the fear I felt,
how many times I have fail,
how much tears I've shed,
how much this pain hurts...
You didn't know, you don't know, you'll never know
what I've been through...
Because you left.
- by Luna hanna |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Because you left
- Artist: Luna hanna
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Description:
well this one i wrote thinking on my father, he left when I was very little and in this poem I reflect how i feel.
hope you enjoy it ^.^ - Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- EmpressYue - 07/16/2008
- cool
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- john greg - 07/16/2008
- i love it, 5 more stars for you
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- Canned Toast - 07/16/2008
- The first stanza was fairly well done. Your second stanza-thing got cluttered and had some typos.
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