3rd Period

• Artist: applesauce262
• Description: their eyes meet she looks away,he wont,he cant,and after all they will be through good or bad he will be there for her,in one way or another.
  
  
  
  -dedicated to Allison C.
  *your the best part of my day*
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: period love zero

you look over to me
i look back
our eyes meet

you look away
my eyes are still reaching for your attention

reaching for that never ending ocean
that fills me with hope just thinking about

no word could describe the feeling i have for you
your pretty
your perfect
your still looking away

you know how i feel
you feel the same way
i know this

so keep looking away
eventually you'll look back

and ill greet you with loving eyes

Comments

[nighthammer17]

When compared to your other works, this one falters a bit, it sounds more like a journal entry than a poem, in that the only poetic portion is about her "ocean of love".
If this is the moment the spark of love began, I think you have the ability to express it in a more pwerful way... I've seen you do it.

[applesauce262]

to find any of my other poems just search my name zerorocker262 or tag "zero" to find them,plz vote and comment,if your profile is viewable and allows posts then i will personally thank you for reading,i hope you enjoy

[ree-ree_bear]

awe this poem is about that girl isnt it 3nodding
she's lucky though yeah she is, dont give up i still havent yet.
i love this poem it touches my heart to relate to something like this

[Shadowren5]

decent