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Crashing to my knees
The sky bleeding rain
I open my mouth and scream
Screams never heard
Drowning in my pain
Taking this knife
That scowls back at me
And thrust it into my chest
Taking my last breath
And throwing it aside
Now look at me
As pristine as you always thought of me
A crazed smile
Curved more than ever
Eyes open wide
Glazed and shocked
Didn't anticipate I'd go through with it
See me laying there
While the rain mixes with blood
Can you almost hear me laughing
- by tksunshine93 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/23/2009 |
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- Title: Shocked
- Artist: tksunshine93
- Description: I was bored, and feeling a little upset and dark I guess and came up with this.
- Date: 01/23/2009
- Tags: shocked suicide
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Blue River Sprite - 02/14/2009
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Your work is so..... STRONG
and beautiful and insightful and amazing and wonderful and just.......... WOW! - Report As Spam
- amythyst crystal - 01/28/2009
- hmm quite.......hmm there are so many words to describe this piece....I'll just go with wonderful^^ 5/5
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- yellowasiann - 01/24/2009
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very.. powerful words used.
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Lady Alice Road Kamelot - 01/24/2009
- Beautiful. I absolutely love this!
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- Lady Xianna - 01/24/2009
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Interesting.
~Xi~ - Report As Spam