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So, the music that gave me the idea is this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tHl993zy9GY
A clean version of the song would give you a better idea of what this will sound like (Eventually XP):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-7c1pRj22l8
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[Opening]
Heh, you just don't understand...Please, listen to me now.
[Verse 1]
Yeah, this might be my only chance,
We might never meet up in this dance,
Called life ever again, so please just listen 'til the end.
You might find out this big surprise,
You might think "these words are all just lies."
But what I say is only true.
Now tell me please, what will you do?
[Chorus]
Will you hide, buddy, hide from the truth I had inside?
If so, then was it all pretend? Can you truly be my friend?
Will you take it all away... Leaving me astray?
The stuff we used to do... What did it mean to you?
You're walking toward the door, do you care anymore?
No, you just don't understand, so please come back and take my hand!
Then you tell me your fears while your eyes fill with tears.
You don't know just what I'd do. See, I would give my life for you!
[Verse 2]
So now look right into my eyes,
The truth shines brighter than the lies.
Do you like just what you see, all that waits inside of me?
But now you don't know what to say,
Then I ask "What's up? Are you okay?"
You hesitate on your reply, but then say "Thanks my friend, I'm fine."
[Chorus]
Will you hide, buddy, hide from the truth I had inside?
If so, then was it all pretend? Can you truly be my friend?
Will you take it all away... Leaving me astray?
The stuff we used to do... What did it mean to you?
('Til the end!)
You're walking toward the door, do you care anymore?
No, you just don't understand, so please come back and take my hand!
Then you tell me your fears while your eyes fill with tears.
You don't know just what I'd do. See, I would give my life for you!
[End]
Will you hide, buddy, hide from the truth I had inside?
If so, then was it all pretend? Can you truly be my friend?
Now just wait until the end, are you really still my friend?
Can you truly be my friend?
You're walking toward the door, do you care anymore?
No, you just don't understand, so please come back and take my hand!
Then you tell me your fears while your eyes fill with tears.
You don't know just what I'd do. See, I would give my life for you!
Will you just run away, will our friendship end today?
This is not my command, but I ask, please, try to understand!
Then you tell me your fears while your eyes fill with tears.
You don't know just what I'd do. See, I would give my life for you!
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So, now you know. I'll fix what needs fixing over time. So, Tell Me What You Think!!
And don't judge me XP
- Title: Draft of what I'm working on.
- Artist: sworder13
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Description:
I'm trying to write some songs XP The one I've been working on for the past couple days is this one. Leave me feedback, and stay and chat please? Thanks!
~sworder13~ - Date: 05/26/2009
- Tags: draft working song music lyrics
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Nymph_de_Artemis - 06/07/2009
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5/5 I like the content of the song.
"You don't know just what I'd do. See, I would give my life for you!"- I'd omit the see. Not trying to be mean, just a thought. I think it sounds smoother without, but you write what's in you heart. - Report As Spam
- jesus pack - 06/02/2009
- sweet!!!! why didn't you start writing song earlier?
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- death wrapper - 05/29/2009
- AWESOME!!!!
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- Rosalie_Cullen951 - 05/27/2009
- I love it!!! u came up with that on ur own??? it's so awesome!!!
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