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My Light
Your hair is streaked with comet fire,
Vibrant eyes a-shower with sparks,
A smooth tongue that soothe away my ire,
Each dawn, from my eyes, you chase the dark.
Strong and lithe, you are my light.
From your elegant hand bright thoughts exude.
For myself, you’ve urged, choose the path that’s right.
You’ve pride in independence, to which your actions allude.
As Mother Nature caresses her child with all her fingertips,
I watch life bubble up from within your heart.
My words of love clutch to my lips,
Though I long for their flight, they refuse to depart.
You are my sun and moon. You mean the world to me.
All our lives are beautiful, that you’ve helped me see.
- by poke_squishy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/04/2009 |
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- Title: My Light
- Artist: poke_squishy
- Description: Another poem I wrote for English about my boyfriend. XD. I like this one.
- Date: 07/04/2009
- Tags: light love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SunshineCulture - 07/12/2009
- I love it, it's beautiful.
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- hinata1595 - 07/10/2009
- last part off it would be really awsome
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- TheSunshinecyanide - 07/05/2009
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Victoria honey, I disagree....nothing is better to see than a poet in love. ^^
Great job^^ poke_squishy - Report As Spam
- Victorias_Secret24 - 07/04/2009
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ummm i have seen better
but everybody is a critic mad - Report As Spam
- scitama - 07/04/2009
- Wow, you have great vocab! The way you worded things here makes me smile smile The metaphors about light brighten up my day too!
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