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"In my bed of black roses,
Where I dream secrets the back of my eyelids keep.
In my red, sky hypnosis,
It's only my beginning."
Laying in her bed, dreaming of the nights,
Where she spent her time hiding, hoping it was alright,
Black visions cloud her eyes, cloud the dreams she seeks,
Coughing from the smell of blood that her skin now reeks,
She spells disaster in the sand, drips blood into the snow,
And where most people cringe, that is the place she'll go,
Laying in her bed, dreaming black nightmares,
She clings to the monsters that most think would scare,
But being alone is the only thing, that frightens her mind's eye,
And anything that doesn't help is consequently just a lie."
- by Tanya Reikasu |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/11/2010 |
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- Title: My bed of Black Roses
- Artist: Tanya Reikasu
- Description: Yet another of my half asleep poems! And I hate to say it but my creativity is at its highest when I'm moody... and when chocolate fixes everything.. yeah.. Enjoy ~<3
- Date: 07/11/2010
- Tags: black roses dark
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Shrouded Nightmares - 08/23/2010
- I like it, the flow is a little off (last comment) But I'll accept that and give it av 3/5
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- bram toker - 08/03/2010
- I definitely know what you mean when you say your creativity is highest when you're moody--I'm the same way. Your rhythm is a little off, but I think this poem is very creative and interesting.
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- Kira_Urufu - 07/13/2010
- I like it 5
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- Morbid Humour - 07/12/2010
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very clever rhyming you have going there. ;D
it's very dark though. I like it~!
I really like the words you've used. Overall it is a really beautiful poem. wink - Report As Spam
- xX-gothic-by-blood-Xx - 07/11/2010
- very nice
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