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As I walk the rocky path,
heading towards the sand,
I try to see how many their are.
Before it gets to dark.
Blindness, is to great for my eyes.
How my eyes can lie.
Physically claims your not here.
But my heart says you are near.
Your presence is warm inside of me.
It comes naturally while breathing.
Oh, how comfortness goes on.
Just like a love song.
No need for instruments or a key;
Our voices together make harmony.
Everyday, attempt to learn,
What you truly yearn.
You search throughout the sea.
Hoping to steal a glance of me.
Sitting and gazing at the shore.
Waiting for you to come back for more.
Go deeper inside your heart.
For that will be your guiding chart.
Taking you where I am.
All the way back to the sand.
Suddenly, i feel your embrace.
Resting your hands upon my face.
Lifting me up; holding my hand.
Our hearts found each other at last.
Staying pure, holding tight
Through the rocky path of life.
- Title: Sand
- Artist: VaLE3rIa
- Description: This Poem i made pretty recently like three weeks ago, i didn't know what to do with it. i was going to give it to my best friend Booco Otori bu then again I am to scared and nervous to and I don't know why. This poem i know I put very hard effort into it. I honestly don't mind criticism. It is not to make the person feel bad to make the person learn from that mistake and make it better in the future.. well please vote in dedication to my friend Booco Otori (gaian).. thanks <3
- Date: 01/21/2011
- Tags: sand
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Aly915 - 01/25/2011
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i love it!! really awesome biggrin
4 stars, good job - Report As Spam
- purplekittehsaysrawr - 01/21/2011
- Nice job! I gave it a five, and returned the favor.
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- HeatDaze777 - 01/21/2011
- I didnt even have to read it all to see that this poem is amazing 5 stars all the way. Good Job
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