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vunurable wispers My journal will mostly consist of my peotry. There might be the occasional entry, but other than that...


M0shing Cigarettes
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Story with no name...
Well Ive been leafing through my spirals I kept while I was locked away in Springwood,and I found this story I believe I started and never finished.
I guess I will put it down here, but please don't laugh. Its not my best. Not nearly at all

~Chapter one~
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"I cant believe this"I whisper to myself. My eyes cant seem to look away from such a...beautiful, mysterious setting. The air surrounding me , feels non-existent, and I'm not sure that what I am breathing in is truly pure oxygen. Its so very overwhelming, so surreal....

The moon gazes upon me deeply, putting me in a trance of some sort. I try to move and its vibrance surrounds me suffocating my very existence. Suddenly I can feel the ground calling to me and everything that was is now replaced in a sinister black.I AM SINKING.

I fall deeper and weaker by the moment into this unbelievable fantasy, and it seems as if only my mind can capture and steal back a grasp on reality.
I feel trapped and broken as I began to weep.

" What the hell are you lying on the ******** ground at this time?" a familiar voice screams into the distance, almost reaching me. I simply wait for the rest of my lecture as I seem to slowly fade back...As expected, unpleasant, barely bearable
screams start ranting to and through me on and on about ridicules accusations. Now that I am fully aware of what is going on around me, I know that the voice belongs to my mother.

With a small amount of effort I pick myself up and slowly walk up to her. I look her deep in the eyes and and mutter, "I love you too". That shuts her up long enough for me to escape up to my 'room'. [If it is even worthy of being labeled as this, in my opinion its more so a stretched closet] considering that I have to walk or crawl across my bed in order to reach my tiny, shoe box I have scrunched up in the corner. I pick it up, place it on my bed and pull out a cheap roach, lite it up and smoke myself to sleep...

I wont dream tonight.

~Chapter two~
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I wake unwillingly to the pleasant array of music and sound. Confused by what I hear, I sit up and find myself staring wide eyed at this unexplainable creature. It looks back at me with an amused sort of smile. Then out of no where it begins to start chirping and talking quite fast so that all I hear is a blend of sounds. My expression stays still and a little emotionless, and I suppose I'm waiting for an explanation to drop out of the sky. As you might predict, I don't get one...

Then I begin to realize that it has stopped talking or communicating[whatever the hell it was attempting] and It is now focused on studying me, which is making me gravely uncomfortable and for some odd reason, self concise.I open my mouth to say something, although not aware of what yet when my door jerks open. I look over to see my mother and for the first time in my life I am actually thankful she is here. Thinking that she can share the shock of not knowing what is happening I feel a slight amount of hope, but to my horror she acts as if their isn't a winged creature perched on the edge of my bed looking nice and intimidating.

She simply puts out her normal morning ritual of telling me to go to school sometime today if not for an hour, try and get the smell of pot that clings to my cloths of and that If I decide to run away or commit suicide, to leave her a note.
Then she takes my last cigarette and shuffles out the door and off to a days worth
of work. My expression must look some what terrified because the creature starts to look sympathetic.

It sighs and tells me I can call it Kaye, as if we are going to be friends or something.
***Well thats where I left off but I think ill add on to it...later.***





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bobfredgeorge05
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comment Commented on: Thu Apr 24, 2008 @ 09:53pm
i like the beginning. i can't wait to read more of it!

btw...thanx for stopping by the shop!!
-Mrs. Lovett-


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