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Life: each breath i take adds another chain
each heart beat puts another knife through me
and with every second i cry another bullet flies in at me
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Ducky's entry re-written in my point of veiw ^^
this girl sits all alone
as she listens to that which sounds like a drum
her dark heart thumping with no beat
her blood starts pumping
her hate for this life that feels a lot like death
rises up to the test
she goes for her gun
everybody began to run
four kids walk up, looking all emo
Dylan, Shannon, Miranda, Lauri
they stand with their guns in hand
are you ready to go? she began again
they each pull a trigger, 1 by 1 sending shivers threw every1
A crowd surrounds our bodies
noticing we all pulled the triggers at the same time...

Few weeks later...
everybody seemed to go back to their lives
except for the few who had true care.


If you read this, please comment saying that you
would actually care, and if you wouldn't .... well ******** u!
and have a shitty azz day!

Please comment!

xXMiss AsphyxiationXx
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  • User Comments: [1]
    hidden_sunshine423
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    Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 09:51pm


    YAY! YOU WROTE ONE TOO! I WOULD ABSOLUTLY! CARE GOSH DARNIT!


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