The girl then ate her beloved nachos. then is more...timeish? He'd rather rip the books than read them. than is comparing.
"How are you?" he asked. the thingy after whatever in the quotations is lowercase, unless of course it's a name. "I'm fine," she replied. there has to be a comma unless it's JUST "I'm fine." like whatever the quote was was just one sentence, and whatever's after it is unrelated.
those are the two that i see the most often. i'll add more as i think of them. surprised
Anna Godly · Mon May 25, 2009 @ 01:00am · 0 Comments |