Hello all and welcome to my journal. This journal is going to be just about my life and how my days are but it's also gonna be like a story here and there. And sometimes if I feel like it I will also be writing poems and silly comments.
Childhood
Cool breeze in front of me,
Light touch straight from the sun,
Soft voices in my ear; why do they sound so clear?
Life is full of hills, waves that flow so still,
Clouds of pictures through my eyes, what new things wait for me in and out...
This is really good. I like this a lot. I love how you described the tranqui environment, and you compared that to childhood. This is really good, I like
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Sat Jul 01, 2006 @ 05:48am
Awww!! *u*
It's so pretty~!!! x3
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 @ 03:09pm
I like <3
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 @ 03:57pm
its good
klaah Community Member
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 @ 08:01pm
aww...wow that s luvly...lol i really like it biggrin
Tom_Marvolo_Riddle Community Member
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Thu Jul 06, 2006 @ 02:55am
awwww i love it!!! its such a pretty poem!! :B
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Sat Dec 23, 2006 @ 09:44pm
thats a really good poem! soo... calming-ish how do u come up w/ stuff like that?