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- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: Page 13 -- Oh, no...
- Artist: Kabocha-chan
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Description:
Yeah, there's nothing I'm submitting here before or after this, so don't worry about context!
No text because:
1. It's too small at this size (web size is at 780px height)
2. It looks fine this way.
Created in Deleter ComicWorks. - Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: kibou manga
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Golden Teaspoon - 03/15/2009
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Just an honest critique,
if you'd like this to appear more
'manga like' I would try having a more
diverse sizing of people, most of your people
are the same size, kinda threw me off, but I do
really like this! Great job! Keep working hard on this! - Report As Spam
- XwowXwowX - 02/15/2009
- ?????
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- MrFuzzy62 - 02/15/2009
- 3/5 nice job
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- 2shy83 - 02/12/2009
- I have no idea what this is about however I am smart enoug hto know that if this whole segment is on one page alone than it's not your wonderful art throwing it off, but the way the author *if it's yours good job anyway* paged it.. would've have been better spread out instead of all slumped together in one. ~ very dramatic though *A Grade* err.. minus the frame that looks a little more *rated*?
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- hollypup10 - 02/07/2009
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nice
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- ScorpioMooon - 02/04/2009
- WOOT,awsome, love it.
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- holysmokinkitty - 02/03/2009
- Nice shadowing well done overall!
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