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- Title: 1.2 Nekomata
- Artist: the view to a kill
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Description:
Page two of Nekomata!! This took forever to do!! But I need the practice anyways- I hope you like it!
Page one is: [url=http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/art/comics/vote/?entry_id=100119667]Here[/url]
if you want to see he entirety of my works (and see my pages the instant I finish them!!) my deviant is: [url=http://the-view-to-a-kill.deviantart.com/]Here[/url]
Please coomment fairly and do not steal!!!! x3
~Mi - Date: 09/28/2008
- Tags: nekomata
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Checkered Knight - 04/04/2010
- o.o Very good. Need's shading and the hands need a bit o' work, but very good. 4/5: Because shading is needed and hands need digits. 5/5: Voting decision for the art in general.
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- Angel Nicholson - 12/20/2009
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*edit* Sorry for my inability to type. I just got in from outside and my hands are freezing, you know that feeling when your hands are so cold they just don't work, right?
Anyways, I forgot to point out that you are veyr good at this, but ..yeah, read the below comment. - Report As Spam
- Angel Nicholson - 12/20/2009
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Honey, I'm not trying to be rude, but I wouldn't steal it if I was paid to. It's not that you're bad, don't get me wrong, the story seems good too, but...your art lacks life. There isn't any shading. It's just flat and lifeless.
Also, learn how to dra hands, the other girl looks kinda silly, Hands are heard, but once you practice a bit, they get easy.
4/5 though. - Report As Spam
- L Catty - 09/13/2009
- good drawing!
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- Kuroi Lucis - 08/04/2009
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I agree with nazuda..
Shading is very important..
without it.. its flat and.. kinda lifeless.. 3/5 - Report As Spam
- Nazuda - 07/02/2009
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very good.
You should try to shade more. - Report As Spam
- ICie Tifa Lockhart - 04/06/2009
- very nice smile
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