- by PsychedelicDreams |
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- | Submitted on 07/01/2009 |
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- Title: The Persistence of Memory
- Artist: PsychedelicDreams
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Description:
Work in progress. I realize that she looks obviously cut and pasted, it was difficult because her hair was so frizzy. I applied a cross-process look to give it a retro feel.
PLEASEPLEASE leave a comment, I really need critiques. Tell me about color, composition, lighting, the whole bit. Bad placement of the clocks? Please tell all.
I really need these technical critiques, I'm in the process of learning what makes a good photo. plus, you get gold for commenting! - Date: 07/01/2009
- Tags: persistence memory time
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Comments (7 Comments)
- black_kiss000 - 08/19/2010
- I love it, its retro and very nicely 70's=D
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- tiggerdot - 09/05/2009
- Ok now i would take the lighting and darken it. Then remove all the clocks. Remember simpler is better. Then just have fun with the photo. Add a personal touch.
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- kilo194 - 08/15/2009
- i think there is too much going on in the photo
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- PsychedelicDreams - 07/16/2009
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I agree about the clock, Ammon.
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- -_Cuthbert-of-Eld_- - 07/09/2009
- I'm not really into crazy edits, and don't consider them photography but.. The clock in the bottom left feels weird to me.
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- x-ray BOOM - 07/08/2009
- love it its freaking awesome
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- crasey12 - 07/08/2009
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it pretty good
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