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i started waiting the moment i was born.
i waited for you to be brought into this world,
waited for us to meet.
waited still for you to notice me.
i waited for you to love me like i have always loved you.
waited to make your legs weak
and now i continue to wait for you, for you to be mine
forever.
- by insainartist |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: waiting
- Artist: insainartist
- Description: the history of us
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: waiting love forever
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Loopiest_Muffin - 01/19/2009
- yah this is rlly good i think it has alot of emotion and sumtimes the greatest emotion is the emptiness that we all feel
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- BookWurm21 - 01/15/2009
- it needs more description and more feeling...right now, it's a poem...
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- TiKKa576 - 12/21/2008
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This was alright
I think there needs to be a little more emotion
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