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Tickety tickety tak tak tak…
Her nimble fingers flew across the keyboard with an expertise beyond her years.
She was a product of her times, a child of the information generation. If it couldn’t be
done on a computer, it wasn’t worth her time. And as a very social twelve year old, she
didn’t have much time to waste.
She logged into the forum under her favorite handle, Little Red. The adorable
cartoon avatar smiled up at her, displaying that she had received a private message since
she had last logged on. She followed the link, and looked at the unfamiliar user name:
B.B.W.
Little Red didn’t really know this user. She had seen a few of his posts on the
board, but he wasn’t one of the users she normally talked with. The Subject of the
message was simply “Hi,” so Little Red’s curiosity got the better of her. She opened the
message.
Hi!
I know we don’t normally talk, but I just
Saw your pic in a thread in GD, and I
Think you’re really cute. Can I have your
Messenger name?
B.B.W.
Little Red smiled to herself. She was always very careful when she chatted
online, to make sure that not just anyone got her messenger name. After all, there were
perverts out there who pretended to be kids. Not that Little Red was a kid. She was too
smart for all of that.
She clicked on B.B.W.’s profile and read through the information listed there. He
was eighteen, and lived just a couple of towns over. Satisfied with what she had learned,
she quickly set about typing out a reply that provided her messenger name. She had
thought about sending her real name, but thought that she shouldn’t rush things. After
all, he could still be a weirdo. A few moments later, her computer chimed and a little box
appeared on her screen. She had just been added to soccer_dude18’s user list.
Hi. The message popped up quickly. Little Red looked at it for a minute, then decided to live up to her second favorite handle, fLuRtYgUrLiE6, and typed what she
thought to be a playful response.
Her parents didn’t like her using names like that. They thought it sent out a bad
message, and attracted the wrong sorts of people. What did they know? Everyone used
handles like that. Some people used worse! So she used what she wanted for her names.
It wasn’t like her parents looked over her shoulder when she was online any more, any
way. She was too old for that now, but all the same, she made sure she got most of her
chatting done before they came home from work.
From where she sat in the family room, she heard the front door open and close.
She sighed, wishing once again that her parents would let her have a computer in her
room. Her mother stepped into the room, home early from work. She leaned forward
and kissed Little Red on the top of her head. Little Red tried to close the window
quickly, but not quickly enough.
Her mother frowned. “What does ‘ASL’ mean?”
“Really Mom!” Little Red sighed with exasperation. Her mother should really
know things like this. ‘It means “At School Late.’ It’s really no big deal.”
Her mother regarded her suspiciously for a moment, and Little Red flared her eyes with annoyance. She adopted a posture of impatience, placing her hand on her hip and cocking her neck stiffly, as she waited for her mother to leave. Her mother ruffled her hair and gave her another quick kiss before she turned to leave the room.
“Five more minutes, and then I want you to do your homework.”
Three months later, Little Red was still talking with B.B.W.; in fact, her had even
caller her a couple of times after school before her parents got home. Little Red was in
love. They had so much in common, she couldn’t believe it! They liked the same kind of
music, the same movies, and he even wanted to be a marine biologist, too. Her parents
told her that she was too young to fall in love, but they were just stupid. They thought
that she was still a child, and she was anything but a child: She was a woman now, knew
all of the curse words, and she had a date on Saturday. A date she would go on without
her parents knowing, as B.B.W. had suggested.
On Saturday, Little Red got up early and took special care in getting ready. She
put on her lipstick, foundation, eye shadow, blush and mascara, then pinned her hair back
away from her face with butterfly clips. She put on a padded bra and matching thong, her
favorite red skirt that was just barely long enough to cover her backside, a white baby
doll tee with “Princess” written across the chest in sparkles, and a red zippered hoodie.
She stepped back to admire herself in the mirror, nodding her approval. She looked like
she was at least fourteen in this.
Throwing her lip gloss in her purse, she ran down the stairs the slip on her shoes.
Her father was walking out of the kitchen, carrying his coffee and reading the morning
paper on his way to the family room, like he did on all of his days off. He looked up,
catching a hint of movement out of the corner of his eye and frowned disapprovingly.
“Where are you going?”
“With Madison to visit her gramma. She hasn’t been feeling very well lately, so
we’re going to try and cheer her up,” Little Red lied. She was really going to the mall,
but he didn’t need to know that.
“Do you think that’s really appropriate?” he asked, indicating the skirt with his
paper.
“Daddy,” Little Red sulked. “Everyone’s wearing skirts like this. It’s cool.”
Her father looked her over with disapproval. Her had never liked this skirt; he
had been against buying it from the beginning, thinking that it was a waste of fabric. For
what little fabric was in it. But nothing would do, Little Red had to have it. A great,
pleated hankerchief was what it reminded him of, and the knee high vinyl boots reminded
him of a hooker. A cheap, trashy hooker.
“Cool? It’s down right cold for this time of year!” He sighed, shaking his head,
knowing he had already lost the battle. “What time will you be home?”
He was aware of his weakness at this particular moment. His father would have
made her march upstairs and change into something more appropriate. Something that
fell to at least her knees, but preferably her ankles. But he wasn’t his father, and how
could he fight fashion? She’d wear it any way. She’d just either put it on at home, or do
put it on somewhere else.
Little Red brightened up. “Later. I have my cell, so I’ll call you when I know
more.” She thought for a minute, then added, “We might be going to the mall, too.”
There. Her bases were covered in case someone saw her at the mall. With a
quick kiss, Little Red scampered out of the house and started off down the street. At the
corner, she stopped to wait for Madison, applying a layer of her favorite cherry lip gloss
with a practiced hand. As she spied Madison, she dropped the tube back into her purse
and jogged up to meet her friend. With one hand, she held onto the purse that was trying
to slide down her shoulder, and with the other, she held the back of her skirt down.
“Damn, girl you look hot!” Madison beamed. “He’s not going to be able to resist
you!”
“You really think?” Little Red giggled, striking a pose to show off endowments
she didn’t really have.
Both girls laughed and started off down the street, talking excitedly. Little Red
had told Madison about B.B.W. from the beginning. After all, what were best friends
for? It had been Madison’s idea to use the grandmother cover story so that Little Red
could go meet him.
“You’re sure you don’t want me to come with you? Just in case he tries
something?” Madison asked as they reached the intersection that marked where they
would part ways.
“I’ll be fine!” Little Red laughed. “I know how to defend myself, and I’ve got my
cell with me. It’s cool. I’ll meet you back here at six?” Madison nodded, and Little Red
started off to the mall.
At the mall, Little Red stopped briefly at the food court and bought a small Pepsi.
She was early, so she needed to kill some time before she went to the music store to wait.
Her drink in hand, she lost herself amid the sea of bodies, window shopping and hurrying
from store to store.
As she wandered, Little Red began to think of the news stories and episodes of
Oprah and Maury that talked about child abductions. Had she set herself up for a fall?
She dismissed the thought almost as quickly as it occurred. She wasn’t like those other
kids, she could defend herself. She knew martial arts from Watching Buffy, and all of
those stupid Jackie Chan movies that her brother liked so much. And if that failed, she
had her hand modern marvel with her, unlike the others. If things got bad, she could call
the police for help, and she’d be saved. Then everyone would be so proud of her for
being so brave, and then she’d be on all kinds of talk shows to tell about how she helped
to catch the bad guy.
Her confidence restored, Little Red sauntered her way to the music store,
checking her watch. She was a few minutes early, so she stood off to the side to wait.
She watched the people as they passed by, thinking that even though she didn’t know
what B.B.W. looked like, but she’s know him because he would be waiting like she was.
She hoped he was cute. She was going to be very upset if he wasn’t. He had
never said he was ugly or geeky, so she was hopeful. If he was, she’d find a way to avoid
him, probably just walk away with one of the many groups that were passing by. She
didn’t see anyone his age hanging around yet, so she didn’t have to worry about ditching
him just yet. The only other person who seemed to be waiting was a scruffy looking,
overweight man who looked to be about her father’s age. Why he kept staring at her,
though, Little Red couldn’t figure out. But she knew that it made her very uneasy.
Little Red got her fifteen minutes of fame. Her website, littlered.com, was a huge
hit until the police raid. B.B.W. had put a lot of time and effort into setting it up, picking
just the right pictures for it. His favorites were from before he drugged her, when she
was wide eyed and fearful, and she screamed and fought against him, but it was easier to
pose her, to do things to her, when she didn’t fight back. There was something appealing,
he thought now, about the vacant look the tranquilizers caused in her eyes. He was even
able to show off his tattoo in some of the pictures: the large, snarling wolf’s head he had
tattooed on his chest.
Dirty little whore… He had given her what she had wanted. What were these
parents thinking, dressing their kids like this? Prosti-tots, that’s what they were. Jail
bait, wanna be prostitutes. He couldn’t understand why their were laws against having
pictures of them, or having his way with them if they were allowed to dress like this. He
enjoyed wrapping that flimsy little thing she called a skirt around her neck and pulling it
tight. She had recover from the drugs her had slipped her by then, and fought back,
clawing pitifully at him with her manicured nails. He had dumped her body in a ditch,
but he had told the police about that in exchange for a reduced sentence.
Lucky little b***h. She made the news, too.
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- Title: Little_Red.com
- Artist: Pouncequick
- Description: Fairy tales were once upon a time intended to warn children, especially young women, about the dangers of society. This is a modern adaptation of Little Red Riding Hood intended to make the story relevant once again.
- Date: 08/31/2008
- Tags: littleredcom
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Jackadelia - 08/31/2008
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actually it is fiction because it isn't a story containing actual people or their story. Thought it is based off real occurrences it has no actual fact in it.
This was very powerful piece. It is raw and real and it is something young people need to read because this can become all too real if they're not careful. Thank you for posting it on here. ^_^ - Report As Spam
- AquaGlitterAngel - 08/31/2008
- That story should have been in the non-fiction section because its tooo true. i never date online or plan to meet someone i dont know. But i like the writing. even though its really sad its really true.
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- Pouncequick - 08/31/2008
- I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was an assignment for a class on pop culture, so I really tried to tap into the influence that media has, especially on youths.
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- AngeliQ - 08/31/2008
- Nice writing style,kept me reading 'til the end.It's a shame how kids are soaking up those slutty visual fashion trends (=video) performers are using to sell their audio...couldn't be more ironic how a culture that promotes inner worth still ends up being superficial and led by animal instincts.
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