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he sits in the chair at the end of my bed
one look an you'll know hes dead
hes got a pummkin head
he killed a boy ned
hes a dark evil goust
hes been to cost to cost
he loves to kill
even at his own will
his name jack
hes been brought back
from the dead
out of my head
hes my best friend'
someone i tend
hes evil
hes mine'
i love him
my goust friend
be mean to me an he'll kill you
my best friend jack
- by iCandyRainbowz |
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- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Jack
- Artist: iCandyRainbowz
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- Date: 11/30/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 07nightshade - 01/26/2010
- Great poem! I like it! great work!
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- wimora - 01/18/2010
- this should be under poetry not fiction...
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- invisibleninja159 - 09/27/2009
- cool
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- BeccaBBB - 08/04/2009
- Pretty good. I like the death theme. Tell me, when you wrote this were you like realy pissed off at something? Just a question so you know, whatever, you don't have to tell me.
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- Just_another_Ojama - 07/24/2009
- nice poem dark and halloween themed.if u wanna write for gold drop a pm
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- AznJamieee - 07/11/2009
- lol i loved it!
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- xBONE_MANx - 06/27/2009
- i like it
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