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Our story takes place on a rooftop somewhere in Seville during the harvest moon. The seemingly young vampire, Alucard, had his eyes on this girl for weeks. Mizuki Hinotami. As her name implied she was of oriental descent, but that didn't bother him. She seemed to have the hots for him too, because she didn't resist him bringing her up to where they are now.
He chuckled a little, because that was all he could really do as he was speechless, besides hold her in his warm embrace.
she kissed him on the cheek and whispered in his ear "If I ran away would you chase me..?"
He smiled at the thought. "Of course I would."
She smiled her signature heart breaking smile "It's good to know."
"why do you ask?" he asked while resisting the urge to do something he shouldn't without permission.
"I think it's wrong to let a woman go off into the night alone..or anywhere for that matter." He said before sliding his fangs lightly across her neck
she winced still smiling at the feeling "You enjoy this don't you?"
"Oh, I enjoy it enough. but more than that, I tempt you with a gift. You're human now, are you not? how would you like to be something more?" he said with a sly smile
"Yes I am human, but something more?" she already knew what he was talking about so she nodded.
"I offer you the chance to join me as a child of the night. Though I would advise you that if you accept, the only way to reverse the process would be to kill me." He held her close again
her body stiffened at the last part of his offer. "I would....I would never kill you. From doll to human to vampire, my years of being a doll and now human were not different. It wouldn't hurt for some change.." she held him tightly.
"If you are 100% sure you want to go through with it..I must tell you. You will feel some pain , and then you will feel better than you have ever felt before. You will be in my world." He looked down at her.
"I will be fine, as long as I'm with you." she was thinking 'this will be my first time with pain...I've never felt the touch of anything when I was a doll. So long as it's with him..I'll be ok.'
"Ok then." he said. He moved the hair by her neck to the other side, put one arm underneath hers and over her belly, and put the other arm so that it was going across her chest and resting her shoulder. After what seemed to be an eternity, He sunk his fangs into her neck and let her red elixir flow into his mouth. It'd been so long, he felt like he was in heaven. But, he knew when to stop so that she would be transformed into what he was...A Vampire.
she shut her eyes from seeing her fresh blood trickle down her neck. Mizuki bit her lip for the first moment, she eased immediately because the pain was gone. She opened her eyes to see if he finished, he was still there.'This feeling..' Again she closed her eyes but not to pain but a new enlightening feeling.
He lifted his head up from her neck, and watched the two puncture marks disappear almost immediately. He took a step back and watched as he the pulse he could normally see radiating from deep within her slowly ebb back into her body.
she felt weak and her knees wobbled "Why..am I so w-weak now?"
"Because the pulse of your heart is slowing down to almost nothing. It allows us to have nearly limitless energy and it contributes to our regenerative ability. Don't worry, you'll be getting your strength back soon." He said as he walked back and held her tight once more.
Mizuki held onto him tightly knowing she'd fall if she didn't. she slowly sang the words: Although worries will always endure,
The door is opening
Walking, falling, you're the one that picks me up and gives me strength
So you'll become a proud star I'll sing
Now I won't do less than my best, I'll become stronger like...
He smiled as he looked down into her eyes and brushed a whisp of hair away from her face. "Don't worry, It'll be alright."
she stopped singing and looked at him with glistening tearful eyes...
"Hey, why are you crying?" he said
she wiped her tears carefully "I'm not exactly sure, I guess I'm happy." she said as she smiled warmly at him.
He turned away and a single blood red tear fell onto the ground
"....?"she held his face gently with both hands and pleading eyes
"Don't worry about me..I'm fine" He said as he closed his eyes.
"Ok.." she just turned to the her side where the moon was clear in the night sky "It's so beautiful..." she looked back to him observing his actions.
His entire Body went rigid for a brief moment, before he relaxed again and pulled her back to him.
"Who was the first person you transformed...?" she asked.
"In all my years of existence, you are the first."
- by Domo_Ownage |
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: A vampire's first Night
- Artist: Domo_Ownage
- Description: the first chapter in a story of a young vampire who has found love.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: vampire
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Comments (4 Comments)
- vampire19710 - 05/15/2009
- cool if u write more message me kk??!!
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- AlanivAsthore - 07/17/2008
- Parts of this are good, mostly descriptions. You have quite a few punctuation and capitalization errors though, and the plot is kind of cliche. It has potential.
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- shirleyhong - 07/17/2008
- I really like it. It's really well written. 10/10
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- libb4090 - 07/17/2008
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yay first comment on your amazing vampire love story.
please please do write the second chapter i'll be waiting wink 5/5 - Report As Spam