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have you ever felt like life was agienst you,
like you were falling down a endless pit of suffering and missery??
have you ever felt like you met your last moment in life,
were you got so scared that you thought you were going to die??
have you ever felt like someone has broken your heart,
who has ripped it in to and cant fix it??
has any of thease things happend to you?? i know they have happend to me... think about wat you do in life.
- by pinkpunk91 |
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- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: have u ever felt...
- Artist: pinkpunk91
- Description: i was vary deprest when i made this. hope u like it.
- Date: 07/22/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Taxidermy Royalty - 07/13/2009
- Too angsty. Angst-on-a-stick does not equal good poetry, contrary to popular belief. 2/5
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- The Grooster - 07/07/2009
- 5/5 it was deep you express your emotions well
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- Kandii Gurll - 06/12/2009
- it was pretty good ^^ 5/5
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- AnimeQueen51 - 05/12/2009
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It doesnt matter about how you spell people damn
I give it 5/5 ^.^ - Report As Spam
- Serenity Tsukasa - 03/04/2009
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@Mar-mar
It should not matter about Grammar and spelling.
just about the writing
I give it a 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Savior_ofunsafespirits - 03/02/2009
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Constructive Criticism:
Have (You) Ever Felt
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Check your grammar and spelling, PLEASE - Report As Spam
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