part of a story i'm writing

• Artist: Pandni
• Description: i made up a character named Sana Uchiha
  sister of Itachi and Sasuke
  and another character named Hai Chita (dumb name i know)
  boyfriend of Sana
  So this story is basiclly the beginning of it.
  (oh and yes there is probley a lot of errors)
• Date: 07/25/2008
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"Sana,come on!", Sasuke yelled.
"Coming!", I yelled back.
I got up off the ground and ran towards Sasuke.I laughed. He did too and he started to run towards the village,I chased after him.
When we got to the village entrance he stoped.I caught up to him stareing at him.
"Sasuke?" I asked "hello? are you okay?"
He just kept stareing straight ahead.So I turned my head and saw dead bodies lying everywhere.I felt tears run down my face and looked at Itachi twenty feet away from us.He had blood all over him.He just looked at us and started walking towards us stepping on bodies.He got five feet away from us.
I know Sasuke was as scared as I was.We just stared frightened at him. Was this it?was i going too die now!? I prayed that he would spare Sasuke.

to be continued




(if u liked my story and want me to write more then comment me on my pro or on here or even pm me)


(thank you for reading ^^)

Comments

[narutoman14]

I think it's pretty nice I wish someone would read my story.

[Pandni]

hi again
i wrote chapter 1 of my story if u would lkie to read it the go to my gallery or type in
"The Untolled story of Sana"

[Pandni]

hiz people!
ty for ur comments
and am writeing more so it will take a while

[Smarties529]

I DEMAND YOU WRITE MORE. O_O

[WarriorPrincess231]

wirte more!!!!!!!! plz

[you-dont-have-a-chance]

pretty pretty pretty please write more!!!!!