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Chain Mail
Erika looked at the e-mail she had just recieved.It looked like a chain letter.She shook her head tiredly and read it.It said:
My name is Alice.I am a 7 year old girl with blood red eyes and dirty blond hair.I was stangled to death.If you don't send this to 12 people by midnight,I will be above your bed.I will kill you the same way I was.
Erika laughed quietly as she deleted it."Stupid spam."she wispered.She stood up and looked at the clock.It was 11:30.She thought,"I'll wait another half hour before bed."Suddenly she heard the stairs creak a bit.She passed it off as the old house expanding.Soon after,she decided she was tired.After she changed,she fell onto the bed and looked at the ceiling.A girl with blood red eyes was staring at her.She tried to scream but no sound came out.
"I see you didn't listen to my mail."she whispered raspily."N-no."Erika studdered."You should have.Now you will have the same fate as me."She said.Her voice sent shivers down Erika's spine.A look of pure terror appeared on her face as Alice grabbed a pair of Erika's pantyhose.Alice fell gently on the bed.
She smiled wickedly.She wrapped the pantyhose around Erika's neck.Alice tied it into a knot and pulled.It took a few pulls,but soon Lily's eyes were lifeless and glassy.Alice removed the pantyhose from Erika's neck.
Alice will always send these messages to people.If you read them and don't do what they say,she WILL find you.You can change your name,you can run away,but all will be futile because she will catch you.
The End.
Author's Note:
I thought this up when I was sent a chain.I thought this story sounded and looked pretty good.I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing.This is my first try at writing horror.PLEASE COMMENT!
- Title: Chain Letters
- Artist: iFlowers
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Description:
A horror story about a girl who didn't do what her chain letter told her to do.
It's not that bad,so read it! - Date: 08/06/2008
- Tags: horror mail chain ghosts
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Gabriella Singleton - 03/02/2009
- hah i love it ;] 5/5
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- xiao_gong_zhu15 - 02/20/2009
- OMG! SOOOOO GOOD! but i get scared easily and chain mails scare me a lot. This is good and scary at the same time. but i also could say that you may need to look more into the punctaution and spacing of the letters. Great choice of words though! lol!!! Keep writing and great job!
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- randomlimon2324 - 01/08/2009
- I also agree with edwit
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 12/22/2008
- I agree with the 2 people who commented before me but I thut this was good so ill give u 5/5
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- Clocks Declaring - 08/07/2008
- I'd have to agree with Edwit-. That, and it was somewhat difficult to read. By that, I mean spacing the sentences apart after the periods. Otherwise, interesting. Chain Letters are so funny. ^^
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- Edwit - 08/06/2008
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You have talent, it just needs to be disciplined.
The plot was short and unsatisfying.
But you know interesting words to use, and where to use them.
The idea of it was kind of funny, though.
Good job, nonetheless.
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