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One snowy day...as i remeber dad hit mom and left out the house and never came back leaving me and my brother and sister and mom.We starved for 3 days with no food...my mom tryed and tryed to get us food but it was no help...then one day she said we are gonna eat today...then she robbed a store and on her way out she got shot by the sales man............
and now this is my life...
it began coming closer and closer to christmas me and my brother and sister began to worry not knowing where mom was...so i decided we should look for her so my sibblings agreed.so we serched and searched and my sister found a newspaper on th ground and picked it up and noticed are mom"s name in bold print stating got shoot be sales man and she was robbing the minimarket.so me stopped and looked back noticing and are sister weeping.. and she showed us the newspaper....
that was a devestating moment..
so i began to think what should i do then i said im the oldest so i need to get done what should get done...so i searched and searched for my dad and finally i found him.And nocked on his door takiing a while to open it he peeked then i hered a crash then he opened it holding a gun and shot and lkilled the three of us...the end
- by Pink_Ink123 |
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- | Submitted on 10/01/2008 |
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- Title: me and my family
- Artist: Pink_Ink123
- Description: its about a poor family that had very little money...and how a brother and two sister survives when they herd of the death of there mother.how did most of the work...how would the survive read on and you will know.
- Date: 10/01/2008
- Tags: family
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Magical Melons - 10/01/2008
- You could of made it a bit more readable.. And i don't think the ending is very good,but if you fixed them it would be great!
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- My_Love91 - 10/01/2008
- Wow when read the first sentence i was captivated by the tragedy...its a real clincher good job!
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