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The Great Journey of Two Young Girls
Chapter One
One wonderful day in Vallejo,Ca, there were two
young girls walkingdown the street. Their names are Amy
and Monika. They were going to their great-great-grandmas
house in the forest, near Rollins Lake.Their great-great-
grandma is so far away from the city because she didn't
like the busy streets. She doesn't live alone.She has two
cats,and a dog. It is hard for her to walk her dog because
she is really old.
Chapter Two
The girls were on their way to grandma's house.
When they got to the forest the kind of got lost. They got lost
because there were some snotty,little punks, trying to snatch them.
They were running as fast as they can. Before they knew it they were
in the forest.Monika thought she saw a little house. Amy thought
that it was just a mirage because it was so hot.Monika was still
desperate to see what it was.So after they got closer they couldn't
see it any more."It is grandmas house!" Amy shouted.In the middle
of the night, Amy heard something bt the door. She woke up Monika.
When they checked to see what it was, they saw the little,snotty punks
that tried to snatch them.
Chapter Three
One of the punks came in from the back door in the cabin.
He coverd their mouths and tied them up in their hide out place.
They started to ask them questions. Amy kept onn answering them,
while Monika was trying to tell her not to.The their grandma woke up
and saw that they were gone. She tried to call the police but there was
no electricity in the forest.So she drove to the police station and told them.
Chapter Four
The police came to the cabin and found a dirty rag on the floor
with blood on it.Their grandma started to cry.They brought the police dogs
to check it out.The dogs found SQUAT!!!!!!One month later, Amy and Monika
found a way to esscape.They got out by playing sick.They went to their grandmas
houise and saw her on the floor DEAD on the kitchen floor.They knew it was the
punks.And so they cremated her so that they would be together forever.The Amy
thought about dumping the ashes into the lake because then she could be with her
husband.The Monika felt sad, and she also thought it was a good idea.Then before
they got kidnaped they promised that they would take care of each other and the pets.
They also promised that they wouold stick together.
Chapter Five
Twelve Years Later
When they turned 23&24,they became a writer. Amy was the author and
Monika was the illustrator. They became really rich.Then they lived happily ever after.
Until Amy died.So then Monika was the only one left in the family. Except the animals.
Ever since Amy died, Monika has been visiting their graves.
The End
P.S. I hope you enjoyed this story.It was really fun to make. It was going to be about
us but we changed it.And we are only eleven and twelve.Thanks again for reading this story.
Author:Angela Ryan
Illustrated By: Ameena Sowan
Made: October 5th, 2008,4:38P.M Sunday
- Title: The Journey of Two Young Girls
- Artist: angiela1
- Description: Two young girls getting lost in the forest, while going to their grandmas house.Their grandmas house is near Rollins Lake.
- Date: 10/07/2008
- Tags: journey young girls
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sir_Snuggly - 11/24/2008
- nicely done
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- angiela1 - 10/08/2008
- i love my mind
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- pumpkinpiiekat - 10/07/2008
- where is the story? i think it robed me!!!
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