somewhere else

• Artist: Miss Odile
• Description: I was listening to Miyavi's Jibun Kakumei and this story just came into my head....for some reason. Anyways it's basically about a girl who loves j-rock and gets to sent to another place.^.^
• Date: 10/19/2008
• Tags: somewhere else yukikazehayashi jrock miyavi

It's hard for me to think and work without J-rock. I listen to Jibun kakumei by Miyavi a lot. I know the whole entire song! I love Miyavi! That's why my i-pod is filled with his songs. I don't have that much friends at school. People think I'm an idiot and weird, but, I want them to belive that.


Year 2017


Like usual, I was blasting a Miyavi song on my i-pod XZ, the latest music technology. You can go on the internet with it and download songs and so much more. I absolutely love to download Miyavi songs! I don't freakin care if the song are sooo last decade. Miyavi is a great J-rock singer!
I was walking down the street and then felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around and there was a guy that was the same age as me. He was very tall. He motioned me to take off my headphones. I took them off. "What do you want?" I asked, I could still hear music playing from my headphones. He didn't say anything, he just looked up at the sky. I looked up too, but, I didn't see anything up there, not even a cloud. I looked at him through the corner of my eye. I could see him putting his head down and smiling at me. I put my head down and looked at him. He walked a bit more closer to me and then all I could see was black.
I didn't know my eyes were closed until I opened them. I could see and feel grass surounding me. I sat up and looked around. I was in a field covered by grass and flowers and was surounded by some trees. I stood up and walked to a tree. I could see what was behind it, more trees and behind thoses trees, which was a city. I walked toward the city behind the trees. Maybe someone can help me, I thought.
I could see, hear and smell the city. There was a lot of people everywhere! I turned around behind me and instead of seeing the field and trees, I saw an alley. "Hey, are ya lost or something? You have been standing there like a statue for awhile." A guy's voice asked. I turned to the direction of the voice and right in front of me was the same guy as before!

Comments

[The_Amazing_Yuuki]

i agree with the first part: i cant imagine what id be like without Miyavi surprised
I write miyavi stories too! smile

[Miss Odile]

To Jimenarocker:
I wanted to make it a realstic/futuristic story..Also this is pretty old..

[jimenarocker]

I think you've got a really great premise for a story, but you're doing a lot of advertising for both Apple and this singer. Now, the singer advertising is nice cos clearly you like him and want others to give him a try too, but advertising an iPod is kind of a big taboo in writing-world. You don't advertise objects unless you know the effect it's going to have on people, because generally advertising in writing generates negative feedback in the reader

[Ghoul Pudding]

I really dont get it...???

[KiraKiraWelcomeToDEATH]

wow, this is good, actually very intersesting in a good way though ^^