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White lights Introduction
The light was so bright, so piercing. It shone into my eyes. I raised my arm to cover my eyes but it still shone through. I stepped back as it got brighter and brighter. It seemed to be coming closer. I screamed but heard nothing. Suddenly, I made out a shape from the light. It was a human, no... It wasn't human. I made out the silhouette of huge wings on it's back, spread out like it was about to fly. I couldn't make out the figure they were attached to.
"Ayumi..." It called to me. Its voice didn't sound male or female. It reached out its thin arm to me, shining of pale white light. Its hands reached to me.
The brightness of its body made me look away. Suddenly a feeling came to me. My arm rose from my side, lifting slowly towards the brightness's hand. I couldn't pull back. My hand was so close to its hand. I felt the warmth of its aura.
"Hurry... Ayumi... Please hurry," It called out again.
I couldn't move my arm anymore. It was frozen in mid-air. The brightness's hand was an inch away. I tried to move it but it was stuck.
"Ayumi... reach... hurry."
I cried out, still unable to hear my own voice. The brightness was suddenly rising slowly up into the air, farther and farther away from my grasp.
"No." I tried to say.
It's shining arm was still reaching for me as it rose higher and higher. I spotted a silver tear roll off the side if it's cheek. I looked up at it, as it was rising into the sky.
"Goodbye... Ayumi." It whispered.
Suddenly the white ground around me was shaking. It shook so violently I had to fight for balance.
Suddenly, I heard a loud crack. I turned around to see a large black crack in the ground, growing larger. I couldn't run, I couldn't move. The ground between my two feet suddenly cracked. It got wider and wider till it could not support my weight anymore.
With a loud shattering sound, the ground benieth me caved in. I was suddenly falling. Falling into a pit of darkness, total blackness. While falling, I looked up to the sky where the brightness was still reaching to me in the distanced sky. It was so far, so high up in the sky.
"Ayumi... Ayumi..." I could hear it call.
I reached my arm out to it, hoping it would grab my hand and save me from this darkness.
- Title: White Lights
- Artist: Finkles
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Description:
This is the intro to the story I'm writing. (Just getting started ^^)
The light was so bright, so piercing. It shone into my eyes. I raised my arm to cover my eyes but it still shone through. I stepped back as it got brighter and brighter. It seemed to be coming closer. I screamed but heard nothing. Suddenly, I made out a shape from the light. It was a human, no... It wasn't human.
~Link on my profile to read more. - Date: 11/11/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- SomethingSatanic - 11/27/2008
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Whoa ! This is so good ! And I was listening
to a sad song as I was reading. It made it
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- Rhiannon Dragon - 11/27/2008
- i will say this, it has definite potential.
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- MidoriMelody - 11/13/2008
- woooooo o-o
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- chi-eah - 11/13/2008
- The sentences seem too short, I'd like to see an extended description of the light. The description of the "light" should be grouped into one, instead of spread out like that. Minor grammatical errors, but I'm not sure if "brightness's" is spelled like that or like this "brightness'." Still an interesting story.
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