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"Ding Dong" went the school bell. As a young boy left the school building all he could think about was to tell his parents about his straight A+ report card. On the way home he stopped at his friend Lein's parents bakery which they mostly just had artificial blood gravy because they were vampires but on Fridays they had chicken dumplings. "Hy Raur" said Lein's Dad Vamp. "Lovely day Vamp" said the boy. I'm here to buy some chicken dumplings. "It will be a sec before it's done" said Vamp. "kay" said Raur. When the dumplings were done Raur slurp it all down and left. As Raur noticed when he was walking beside the trees that covered his house he saw smoke in the direction his house was. Seeing the smoke it made him worry so he started to run. When he got past the last tree that was covering his house he saw his house was on fire.
To be Continued......
- by Warcraft Hunter |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: The Agent 1st Chapter
- Artist: Warcraft Hunter
- Description: A story about a boy who was emotionally scarred for the rest of his life.
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: agent
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Comments (3 Comments)
- LexOnFyr - 03/15/2009
- uhh.... use commas.... and since when did school bells go "ding dong"? i thought that's what door bells are.
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- IcyWolfling - 12/03/2008
- Try expanding it. It reads like a summary.
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- the-forsaken-demon - 11/30/2008
- ummmmmmmmm vamp? really 2/5
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