- It was a Preditor. I was running as fast as i could with ace bandages and the news. India had broken her ankle when running through the woods. we mover her to the top of the fortress and handed her a scoped hunting rifle. She set up and i grabbed my sniper and started giving orders to my soldiers on were they needed to be. A Hum-Vee drove up and and i gave tyler the option to fire. He put one in the drivers chest and i shot the turret opperator off. Then the strike initiated. I scoped over 10,000 armed soldiers along with about twentyfive tanks coming our way. we were more than outnumbered, but my unit was happily ready for the challenge. The turret squad cocked their weapons and sighted enemies. I waited till they were in the turret squads range then i gave the order to fire. I took brave men to operate turrets beacause one tank shell to their tower and they were screwed. The turrets opened fire, i gave the snipers permission to fire. The ground squad and tank buster squad waited in cover till they were needed. But then somthing terrible happened, i saw a grenade fly into the turret tower. I knew it was over for them, but then i saw someone jump out. It was one of my best friends Isaac. I could'nt watch anymore and i got back to shooting. Then they started hiding beehind their tanks. Our tankbuster squad took care of that. But then something happened.
- by lethargic beast |
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- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: the strike
- Artist: lethargic beast
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Description:
This is a short chapter of an action book me and my friend tyler wrote. Their is no picture because we wrote the book
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: strikefriends
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Lennus - 04/06/2009
- o.O but then something happened? really mate?
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- greennywithblood420 - 03/09/2009
- This is the biggest hunk of sh*t I've ever read. How old are you like 9? It has too few words too describe too much. But I do agree with Dr Failgood- when I say the last line is very well placed. Tax the rich feed the poor.
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- Dr Failgood - 12/03/2008
- The choppyness of your writing style made the scene seem more dramatic, and the last line was very well placed. It sort of, stopped all of the momentum, and leaves the reader wanting to know more about what has happened. Good job. 4/5
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