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*only the part i typed not all of it*
Stuck at Camp
This summer was the worst summer ever at Camp Willawillabingbong……………..
My name is Annie, Annie Crystal Apple is my full name. And I’m 14 years old. I was born in New York City, New York……………..but this year we moved to Beverly Hills, California. I’m afraid I won’t make enough friends over the summer. But my mom is sent me to camp with my 7 year old sister named Nicki. I don’t want to go to camp.
It’s the first day of summer also the first day of camp. The Willawillabingbong bus will come in an hour. I stood, waiting. This girl about my age came to me. “Hi,” she said. I replied ‘hi’ back. “My name’s Fayla, what’s yours?” “Annie.” “Cool!” “You going to camp Willawilla-“ “YES!” I was amazed with her excitement. The bus came, we got on and sat together.
On the bus I saw LOADS of people! One in which was a cute boy! I started with a “Hey.” “What’s up?” “I’m Annie.” “I’m Brad.” “I’m 14.” “I’m 15.” “COOL WE’RE JUST ABOUT THE SAME AGE!!!” he starred at me in a weird manner and turned away. ‘Great!’ I thought ‘Now he totally hates me!’ “We’re here!,” shouted Fayla. Everyone screamed in relief.
We got off the bus. There was a beautiful girl, about 19, she said “Welcome to Camp Willawillabingbong! I’m your camp counselor Grace” she talked to us about the camp and sent us to our cabins.
I was in a cabin with 4 other girls. A 14 year old name with short black hair named Jamie, a 10 year old with shoulder length brown hair named Molly, a super mean 16 year old with bright red hair floor length named Tessa, and my sister, Nicki. Fayla didn’t get into my cabin and was put to the one next door. I got the bottom bunk with Jamie on the top, the other bunk had Nicki on the top and Molly on the bottom and Tessa took the single bed and moved it far away to the other side of the small cabin. Tessa set up a black curtain around her bed. “This is my territory so stay away babies!,” Tessa retorted.
The next day, at seven in the morning, Annie (that’s me!), was pick to choose who sat at what table for breakfast! I picked Brad, Fayla, Nicki, Jamie, Molly, and myself for one table and the others to random tables. Pancakes were for breakfast.
Later that day, Fayla had to go to the camp nurse because apparently she’s allergic to pancakes. We all had the day off to do whatever we wanted! Me and Brad went to his cabin. They had a secret plasma t.v.! “Whoa!,” I said. He left his cabin with a frown and said he had to do something……………..
That night, I woke up to hearing laughter. Tessa was gone! I ran out of the cabin. I ran to the makeout cliff, our secret midnight love spot, and gasped, Tessa was there—smooching with Brad!!! “Brad,” I yelled. We were having a back way talk. “How could you be with Tessa?!?” “I like Tessa she is my height and my girl.” They smooched some more. “I can’t believe-.” “Annie-,” Tessa retorted. “I’m sorry.” I left. I heard them laughing as I left.
The next day, we had a camp water race. We had the race in the lake. Me, Brad, Jamie, Molly, and some boy Matt who is Brad’s best friend. READY, SET, GO! We went SUPER fast! Me, Jamie, and Brad in the lead. ‘Tessa’s such a goth’ I thought. “Everyone! Get to the edge of the lake! There’s a hurricane coming!,” Grace yelled on a megaphone. Brad and I didn’t hear and got lost in the hurricane……………..
That night, Brad and woke me up. I screamed. “SHHH!,” he said. His waterproof watch said 1:00 A.M. It was pitch black out. Brad’s arm was bloody. “You fainted in the lake, I saved you, we were attacked by alligators,” Brad said it so calmly, he must have been tired, Both of my legs were bloody. “Oh my god!” I screamed. He took a plant and made me smell it. I fainted.
It was 11:00 A.M. We were quiet all morning, “I broke up with Tessa,” Brad said. “Why?,” I asked. “She’s a goth.” “No, really?,” I said in a sarcastic way. “Ya, she is.” We saw search lights. “HEY! HEY! OVER HERE!,” we yelled. The search boat came and we were off.
The next day there was a hike. Me, Brad, Tessa, Matt, and Nicki were in one group. “Here have an African Friendship Bracelet,” said Fayla. “I-I-thanks,” I stammered. We started the hike. “I’m sick,” Nicki said, “sorry sis.” “Go to the nurse Nicks,” I said. She left, we left.
We walked for what seemed like hours then we came to the camp spot. We were getting our tents ready. We were going on an over night hike. Brad and Matt were in one tent. While Fayla and me were in another tent. We made a campfire and cooked little hot dogs and made smores. While it was nighttime I heard a rushling noise. I peeked out of my tenet to see what or who it was. It just happened to be Brad sneaking off. He was headed for Tesssa’s tent. Tessa just happened to have got the single person tent. I decided to follow Brad to see what he was up to.
As I was following him I saw something fell out of his pocket and he didn’t notice. When he was a good distance away I picked it up and put it in my pocket. ‘I’m gonna read it later’ I thought to myself. As we neared Tessa’s tent I thought we were near the distention point. But we just kept going. I thought we would never stop when I bumped into him.
He said I could stay and watch as long as I didn’t make a noise I promised I would be very quite. He believed you and we set off.
- by MelanieMaximum |
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- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: Stuck at Camp
- Artist: MelanieMaximum
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writers note *this book is written between me and my best friend tiffany (tiffanytrauma)*
Annie was a New York city girl whos mom made her move to Beverly Hills,California.Her mom wants her to make some friends so she sends her to camp...........camp Willawillabingbong.It starts off good then takes a turn.Will Annie's camp turn out the way she and her mom wanted it to?Or will it be messed up? - Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: camp story tiffany melanie cool
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Comments (3 Comments)
- BookWurm21 - 12/14/2008
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that was great! is there a second part????
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- TiffanyTrauma - 12/03/2008
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=O
i wrote it too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but you typed it =]
great job miss radioactive ;D - Report As Spam
- Kiseki Domination - 12/03/2008
- ha ah very nice mel ^ ^ 5/5
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