Love....Period.

• Artist: gaaras and milk
• Description: PLEASE COMMENT!!!! T^T This is the Epilouge to a story I'm thinking of writting. Tell me what you think PWEEZ!
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: heart love

Love. Just four letters. L-O-V-E. Yes, it was simple, pure in every way; just the things that came along with it made it difficult. How could just four letters…mean so much? It seemed in possible—improbable to me! More than once I had to remind myself I wasn’t in a dream, in some fantasy that my mind had brought to life within my own imagination. No…it was real. All of it! Even if I wanted to deny it. I was in love…and no one can control who they fall for. I just got lucky.

Comments

[lobsternub]

Although the commenter below me was a bit harsh i do have to agree in some ways. This seems more like a prologue. I would disagree with scrapping it, maybe work on it a bit though. Incorrect spelling and grammar always turn me off when reading, but yours isnt so bad as to be uninterpretable. (I probably spelled that wrong...) I would like to read more, if this is just the prologue or epilogue. Could wind up being an interesting story, you never know.

[Esoteric Order of Dagon]

I believe you're thinking of prologue, and if it is a prologue-scrap it. It does not grab the reader's attention in anyway. Nobody wants to read some squealing teenage girl going on and on about her latest crush.

[bluetopazangyl]

I like it

[gaaras and milk]

it's not really a poem...but thx! ^^

[super sweet hinata]

nice peom ^^