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Last Dance
We gazed into each others eyes as we slowly danced. But I had yet to find out it was the last dance. His loving brown eyes were captivating. "You have the most beautiful eyes" he whispered. I smiled; i knew he was thinking about my eyes too. I gripped his sides tighter&hoped nothing would end this moment. It lasted until he cried out in pain. He fell to the floor. Why he bled I did not know. I too fell to the floor beside him trying to help him. "Sweetie," he said dangerously close to silent, "I always loved you, everything about you. I always will too...Until the end of time, we will be together forev---" he choked and his glassy eyes stared into mine lifelessly. "NOO!," I cried "Noo NO NOO! Not you! Not now!" I hovered over his body. Tears pouring down my face, staining my silk dress…I tore the emerald green ribbon out of my beautifully pinned up hair...No need to look pretty now. I lost my love…My all...My one and only...
Flowers (Follow up to Last Dance)
I lay the crisply new flowers on his clean pressed grave. He’s not here with me anymore. Never gonna hold me...Never gonna kiss my lips...Never gonna say how pretty I look...Never again gonna say I love you...Never ever again...I wept quietly. Tears falling on the soil of his remains...It started to rain. I looked up at the gray skies. There’s no one like him…I lost my love. I remember all the precious memories we shared...Our first kiss on the beach, when we held hands walking in the park...Every place i go to has memories of him...I would never be able to go any where with out crying at something reminding me of him...
- by AliceCullenOmg |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Last Dance & Flowers
- Artist: AliceCullenOmg
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Description:
Last Dance: This is about a girl who is dancing with her boyfriend for the last time. But she doesn't know its her last moment with him. He gives her his last words telling her how much he loves her..He doesnt finish..Please read the short follow up to this called "Flowers"
Flowers: A girl lays flowers on her boyf's grave and cries at the memories of him and her...
I hope that you liiked the stories&i hope it made ur emotions run ;D haha. Keep watching for more of my writings!
<33AliceCullenOmg - Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: flowers followup last dance tragic
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Trouble Gail 3 - 02/27/2009
- omg, I loved it! I got alittle tear in my eyes but I cant really find it in my heart to like this kind of stuff. But I loved it. I wish I could write like you, my writings cocme out like crap. Great job!
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- eanne16 - 02/07/2009
- wow..it's really nice..i liked it! ^^ how about making another one?
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- Arlikie - 12/29/2008
- Aww, I loved it. Seriously, you should write a tragic romance novel one day.
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- Xx-Luna-Kitty-xX - 12/24/2008
- that was wonderful it made me cry
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- AyameRedRibbon18 - 12/20/2008
- I feel like I could cry. It is beautiful...
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- IHeartWallFulls - 12/20/2008
- Wow that is touching.
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