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Awakening from her slumber namanai arose from a coffin.She was in a mansion.She shifted onto the rough floor.As she walked Namanai made bloody footsteps.It smelled delicious to her but she resisted.She was struggling to hide the temptation to bite HERSELF to get blood.Her long white dress swept,tickling her ankles.She stopped outside a door,not knowing why and forced it open with her weak pale hands.She saw a boy about 17.She shifted uneasily.Something about him wasn't right.His eyes glowed a bloody red.He was a vampire aswell."I'm glad to see another vampire like me,but i do not know you,speak your name,"she said confident in her choice to speak.
"My name is Roxas"he said in a calm soft voice,his eyes suddenly turned to their natural colour,they only usually turn red when vampires sense blood and are thirsty for it.He had blonde spikey hair and sea blue eyes.They were so beautiful and sparkled so very prettily.He walked towards her.She wasn't scared of him just abit cautious.He suddenly grabbed hold of her."your thirsty for blood aren't you your eyes are glowing and your panting which sounds very tempting to do something"he said stroking her neck at the same time.Namanai hadn't noticed her eyes and her breathing louder.Her heart was racing.Namanai's back was facing him so she didn't know what he was doing.He told her not to worry.As he said this he turned her around and kissed her.She felt something nice pass through her throut,moving through her veigns.His blood.He must have bit his tongue to let her drink it.He held her head further in so she could drink more.He fell back and they lay on the floor holding eachother like they were a cute couple.
- by vampire alessa |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: Her Story
- Artist: vampire alessa
- Description: This is about a girl called Namanai who is a Vampire but is confused.She knows nothing of her past life and has haunting images of blood screams deaths and pain!!....i'm not sure if i want to continue it.Its costing alot.Let me know if you think I SHOULD finish it. WOT DO YOU THINK????????
- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: fiction story vampires blood scary
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Comments (7 Comments)
- KatiaynaTheCrazy - 08/28/2009
- Roflwaffle omg wtf ubber ubber leet
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- rocknrollhobo - 05/09/2009
- i think u should finish it
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- BlissChoco - 04/22/2009
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Sounds like you toke some characters from KH, eh?
None the less it was good. <3
WRITE MORE. D:<
NOW.
I DEMAND MORE WRITING/TYPING. - Report As Spam
- Cejackson017 - 12/23/2008
- WOW.. you did a great job your story was..intriguing U betta write more it had me on the edge of my seat I'm suprised I didn't fall...lol...no but seriously write more your gooood
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- Dolly Akezai - 12/21/2008
- FINISH IT RIGHT NOW!!!I COMMAND IT! lol but really finish it!I like where this story is going. ^-^!!! -Tremora
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- azn_vampire101 - 12/21/2008
- you should finish it
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- vampire alessa - 12/21/2008
- This took 4 days to write in rough its a shame to waste presious time let me know if you think i should continue
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