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Something pulled Serene back from the dark void within herself... Light...
"Serene! Are you awake?" Her father whispered... She was struck by a sharp burning within her throat. "Father... get back!" she pleaded through a weak voice. At once he understood. "Here," he said handing her a freshly slaughtered rabbit. She could smell the blood. The pain in her throat became more defined... Without even thinking, she took the rabbit and drained it of its precious blood, losing herself in doing so. When she had finished and could once again think more clearly, she grew disgusted. *Am I one of them? No, It can't be! I'd be better off dead!* "Where's mother?" She wanted to say goodbye, she knew how much this would hurt her. But Serene just couldn't bear the shame. "She's dead! And it's all your fault! You're the one that led that disguisting creature here!" "Where is it?" "He fled! Your mother sacrificed herself to try to save you!" With that, her father kicked her. It stung for a moment, but not as long as the truth of what she'd done...
- by MoonFilledTears |
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- | Submitted on 01/15/2009 |
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- Title: Of Blood and Magic: 2
- Artist: MoonFilledTears
- Description: Ch. 2 The Awakening
- Date: 01/15/2009
- Tags: blood magic
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Comments (3 Comments)
- MoonFilledTears - 01/23/2009
- This chapter is actually trying to not only portray the relationship she has with her father, but also show that she is changing. Both of which are essential to the plot. As for being a "real" chapter (sorry to sound mean) but, authors have used even less, in published and best selling books. Mainly my goal was to show that there is more to the story, for SKBCTayuyaFluteofDeath but I only had a short time to write it, so I couldn't write a whole lot.
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- Skadi Sundermount - 01/22/2009
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"you might"
"want to indent"
"words"
Also its not really a chapter if nothing happens to further or accomplish the plot. - Report As Spam
- Riruka-Rukia - 01/22/2009
- hey first comment. great job. need chapter three. so good.
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