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"There's... there's just... so much." Dizzy... She was so dizzy. There was so much, surrounding her. Her arms were burning. "Dani?" She sounded so weak.
"Yah?" He whispered through his tears.
"I..." Her voice was garbled. "Dani, I... I love you." Dani sniffed.
"Ya, I love you to." He was sure she was dieing, and knew he couldn't stop it. She smiled and closed her eys, sighing. "Thats right, honey. Just... Just close your eyes." Tears poured down his face.
"But Dani, my arm hurts! Please make it stop! It... It's burning Dani!" Her eyes flew open and she gasped, her cheast heaving. Dani scrambled around, looking for something to stop the pain.
Then, some bandages appeared out of the corner of his eye. He grasped the bandagess in his hand and looked back at her. But instead of looking at her face, as he usualy did, he looked down at her arm. It was covered in new and old blood, which flowed freely from long gashes slashed into her arm. When he coudn't bear to look at it anymore, he wraped her arm in the bandages. She winced and sighed,
"Thanks, Dani." She whispered sleepily.
"Hey, no prob! Ivy?" He replied, using her username.
"Ya?"
"What's your real name?"
"It's mina. Mina Johnson." She closed her eyes again.
"Thanks." He whispered. Knowing it would make her feel better, he began to hum her favorite song. Soon enough, he heard her groggy voice whispering along. When the song ended, he whipered goodbye, and in his arms, with a smile plastered on her face, Mina Johnson said goodbye to the world, and fell limp.
- Title: Unknown title
- Artist: Hunapo
- Description: Seriously depressing story I wrote. Got really bored at home and was seriously depressed... lol but im not now. Naturally, if you have read my stuff, you know im apsolutely in love with cotastrophy and hatred along with depression and death... *cof*suicide*cof* btw, I know you might be confused with this story and I know it's not compleatly done. better description later...
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: unknown title
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Thorn Of The Sky - 07/18/2009
- Well whatever rachelisweisz says,it was very good.Maybe it's just me,but there were not many errors in there.
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- Hunapo - 04/14/2009
- Thanks? ummmm... at least rach was telling me strait forward in a slightly nice way... I think...
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- Trouble Gail 3 - 01/21/2009
- wow =o
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- Hunapo - 01/19/2009
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First com... better description:
They met online and then met in real life. Then they ran away together and fell in love. She thought he was cheating on her and cut herself. He found her dieing and tried helping her. The other person is damien, dani's best bud. - Report As Spam