Whats going on? (part 3)

• Artist: Tanner The Killer Panda
• Description: (part 3)
• Date: 02/04/2009
• Tags: whats going part

I walked out the closet, it was so errie. so creppy... MAN! as walked around i kept seeing exit signs. i was so close! thats when my heart sank. the exit door was blocked by all sorts of stuff. then i herd a voice. A womans voice. "Helllp" she siad. "somebody please help me" i ran over to the voice... no body. "huh" i siad out loud. when i relized, if i went down the stairs, i could go through to the car park. i ran down the stairs, and followd the car park exit signs. Oh crap! the exit is leading down MORE stairs. But thats not the problem. The room was flikering a white light. GREAT... just great. when i creeeeppped down the stairs, the room was so creppy. But when i reached to the bottom, i looked from side to side. I saw the way out. but the bad part was, the doorway was a- "AAAGGGGGGGHHHH" the ground thing came charging at me! END OF PART 3. PART 4 WILL BE CALLED: THE NIGHTMERE WILL NEVER END.

Comments

[Chuhin]

......... the refrence image looks like a level from luigis mansion.

[saraaleece]

not too bad, but you used the word creepy too many times O.o i would use spell check too. just some constructive criticism. =]