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"Sam! Time to go hunting." I looked up from the T.V. to see Katie glaring at me. I was the queen of sarcasm so this was what I did. I crossed my arms and raised an eyebrow.
"I'm not thirsty. Maybe later." My attention turned back to the T.V. Katie was my older vampire sister but when I give her sarcasm, she just glares. I saw her give a have hearted smile and open the door.
From the corner of my eye, I saw my family pile up at the door ready to go.
"Are you sure Sam?" my vampire mother Alana asked.
"Yeah I'm fine. I'll just go see my human family for a while. School starts in an hour." I said my eyes still glued to the T.V. screen. Alana just shrugged and walked out the door. I got up from the couch and jumped out the window and I ran as fast as I could. I passed trees and houses on my way by. Living a double life was interesting. I go back and forth between familys and my human family never notices. Mark, my vampire brother, said I wasn't allowed to tell my human family about them and I sworn I would never tell a human. I suddenly skidded to a stop in the woods. I peered through the trees and spotted our house. I walked home and enjoyed the nice spring weather. I finally got home and got everything ready for school. I ate Fruity Pebbles and sat on the couch. Mom finally woke up. I chuckled. Sometimes, it was really funny knowing all that I've done that day and when I got home humans just started waking up. Well, most anyway. I have adapted to not feed on humans. I only do when I'm with Alana, Katie, and Mark. Mom looked at the clock on the wall.
"Hmm your bus should be here soon Jordyn. Maybe you should leave now." I nodded and walked out the door. Oh yeah, when i'm in "human mode" I'm called Jordyn. As a vampire, Sam. I sat on the bus not knowing that later I would have a life changing expericence happen. With a human named Austin.
- by Sam Cullen6 |
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- | Submitted on 02/05/2009 |
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- Title: Forbidden Love
- Artist: Sam Cullen6
- Description: YAY chapter 1! Sam is a vampire but no one knows. She plans to keep it like that. She lives with a human family and then she lives with a vampire family. She goes to a human school because she is sick of her vampire acadamy. Her vampire family told her she has to marry a vampire when she grows up, but what would she do if she falls in love with a human.....
- Date: 02/05/2009
- Tags: forbidden love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- caylee-happyhooker - 04/05/2009
- i luv it it's kinda like a more stereotypical twilight. but i thot ur's was better.
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- Lolita the Vampire - 02/19/2009
- ...WHAT?!?!?
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- Hunapo - 02/18/2009
- Personaly, I actually liked this. I hate how people hit on twilight just cause it "bad". I thought it was actually really good; from a literary perspective as well. This was preaty good, other than come errors in spelling and grammer. Can you write some more???
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- Angelus Prime - 02/16/2009
- lame
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- -_Cuthbert-of-Eld_- - 02/09/2009
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First person = no, unless you are doing some sort of intelligent story commenting on society.
Vampires = No, unless they are a change of pace (Trad. vamps.)
Don't write in the realm of Twilight, because twilight is terrible, when looking at it from a literary perspective. - Report As Spam
- RoronoaDamian - 02/07/2009
- cool
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- Critical Stupidity - 02/05/2009
- Is it a Twilight fan-fiction? Just the setting reads a bit like it XD
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