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I rolled over in my bed and jumped out, it was three am but i had a feeling i needed to go into the living room. I walked up to the window and looked out,the moon was full. suddenly there was someone behind me i felt the hand grasp my shoulder, i let out a shudder it was cold. then he whispered in my ear "could you love me" and then i felt his teeth puncture my neck and i fainted.
I woke up in my bed there was a note on the dresser,
dear, my love
I thank you for last night i will return
and ask again tonight and a bit of advice don't
fight.
i was scared but i wanted to see him again i had a yearning to have him caress my neck again so i waited. Three days and he finally came, his arms wrapped around me. I was cold but i wanted to stay there forever. He kissed my lips then whispered to me you will die and three days, but i didn't care i would for him and a t the same time i wanted to break free of him and escape but i knew that couldn't happen.
to be continued....
- by Zoe of your sin |
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- | Submitted on 03/05/2009 |
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- Title: I couldent love you
- Artist: Zoe of your sin
- Description: i just felt like writing a love story
- Date: 03/05/2009
- Tags: couldent love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Evil_Genius_Chemist - 03/23/2009
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XxThe_Dying_LightxX, why would you like it even more if the author was a guy, that would make you a sexist b*****d who needs to keep out of the arenas.
Grammar could use a little work though. And commas wouldn't hurt.
5/5 10/10 - Report As Spam
- XxKay-kunxX - 03/08/2009
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Question. Are you, the author, a Boy?
If so, I Love this even more then I did a second ago. Shonen-Ai.
Oh, by the way, your grammer sucks. You need to learn to put commas. And you need to put capital I's. OK?
Other then that, I Loved it! - Report As Spam