- One Day A Family moved in to a nice little house on september 6,1998.They unpacked the kids stuff and noticed that the packages where already unpacked they were confused the mom asked "hunny did you unpack the kids stuff?'the dad said "No why?" the mom yelled "because there unpacked thats strange".The kids were playing outside they heard..a crackle in they yard they screamed "MOM DAD!!!!!' the parents came hurrying outside they asked "WHATS AMATTER' the kids didnt answer they ran frightningly in to the house the parents ran behind them.the kids ran in to there room and locked the door then all of a sudden the parents heard a voice....it said I am not mean..or am i.... the kids heard it they unlocked the door they saw a shadow it came closer...and closer the kids screamed the parents fainted on the ground the kids slammed the door but then he went through the door....what will we do asked one of the kids named jeffrey the other kid ayla said idk we are in bad danger.Jeffrey picked up the phone and dialed 603-ghost mysterie gang.This guy awnsered "Hello thank you for calling ghost mysterie gang how may i help you?" Jeffrey said "Help theres a ghost in my house i need help ammeditly im only 9 i dont know what to do!!!!' the guy said "ill be on my way with a group dont worrie just try to hide' jeffrey yelled"AHHHH HELP ME AND SISTER!!!!" The phone dropped the guy yelled"HELLO YOU THERE no one anwsered he drove as fast as he could with his group the truck arriveded he saw the kids they were in the yard running in to the woods the guy yelled "KIDS WE ARE HERE GET OVER HERE AMIDDETLY!".The kids came over he saw the ghost he pulled out a sucking machine the kids read:the sucking 4000 WOW said the kids the troup ran over suddenly the ghost dissapeared into the dark ness.The troup saw somthing opening in the air it was black....it was a portal with ghost and bunches of them coming out of it the guy said "stay behind us kids" All the troup people took there sucking 4000 out they kept sucking up the ghost till there was only soul dust from them they sucked up the portal.The kids ran up the stairs in there house MOM DAD WAKE UP!!! the parents woke up huh they said the kids explained the story the parents looked at each other with a smirk nice joke jeffrey and ayla IT ISNT A JOKE MOM AND DAD even ask these guys the troup came up the troup explained the parents looked at each other strange they both said it could have happened.The parents stood up so ghost were here? yes the kids said even the troop said it.They heard a voice in the sucking 4000 it said ill get you no matter what it takes!! the kids looked frighten but then laughed but first you have to get out they said but then they asked wat do you do with them? the troup looked at each other should we tell them ....yes but there kids the troup whispered i know said the troup leader but they want to know so they told them the kids just did a face O.O they went to sleep the next day it was a normal and nice day they fixed the house and planted flowers and played in there pool. The End
- by Captain jake102 |
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- | Submitted on 03/15/2009 |
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- Title: the spooky man!
- Artist: Captain jake102
- Description: This story is about a family that moves in to a house that look like it was nice but it was not as they notice the crackling of the leaves in the yard the kids screamed.the parents came running out...
- Date: 03/15/2009
- Tags: spooky
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Vere_Rodriguez - 07/13/2010
- Nice story. It didn't have any punctuation so it was hard to read. I have to say you could've made it longer... There's a website called www.youngwriterssociety.com , so how about you go check it out ifit's your real passion!
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- Captain jake102 - 05/23/2009
- they ate the ghost lol
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- kiki601 - 04/06/2009
- What did they actulley do to the ghosts?????
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- drkrogue532 - 03/28/2009
- nice story, but remember punctuation is your friend.
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- Yasmine Jones - 03/22/2009
- its cool
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