-
After the great battle peace was made between ware wolf and vampire. I knew now I must finally marry the vampire queen. The day of the marriage she wore a black wedding dress. I wore a white tux and was human. From the underworld the vampire king watched the marriage."I must stop this from happening," said the king in great rage. Do you Jason take her to be your wife til death do you part?,"he said "I, Jason Samuel James King, take you , to be my wife, to have and to hold from this day forward, for better or for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish; from this day forward until death do us part," I said. And do you Queen of the vampires take Jason Samuel James King to be your wife, to have and to hold from this day forward, for better or for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish; from this day forward until death do us part?" he said.
He asked. "I...Just then the vampire king appeared. He showed great rage in his eyes."This is over!" He said in rage. Out of the underworld came the vampire undertakers."Give me the girl," said the vampire king. I opened a portal and sent me and the queen though it.
"oh! Where are we?" She asked."We our in the world of Corflix," I told her."Of what lives among us in this world?" She asked me."My people," I tell her."But will my king be able to find us here?" She asks me in fear."My world of Corflix is unknown to all that do not walk among it," I told her."I am king of this world, no one has a higher power than I," I informed her."And I am of low power over my people," She says to me."I will do everything In my power to give you full power over your people," I told her.
"We shall get married here," I told her."Shall it be today?" She asked me.
"At dawn," I said. So we went to the center of Corflix when dawn hit and got married. Once again I she walked down the wedding aisle in the black dress, but this time I wore a black tux and was Exseada We said our vows."Through thick, though sorrow I will always hold you in my heart," I said to her."Nothing in the world will break my love for you," She told me."So do you Exseada Do you Jason take her to be your wife til death do you part?," He asked me."I do," I said."And do you ,the queen of the vampires, take Exseada, to be my husband, to have and to hold from this day forward, for better or for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish; from this day forward until death do us part," he asked her."I do," she said. We spent the rest of that day in the Corflix Zone. I showed her just what it meant to be a true queen of Corflix.
"Meet my friends," I told her."these are the people that I called my friends throughout my journey in the Corflix Zone," I told her."This is Cain," I told her. A great swords man and warrior. He wore a black and brown samurai clothes and a cloak and had black spiked up hair. his eyes were gray, when fighting they would turn red like a fire. He has great knowledge of the creatures of witch crawled the Corflix Zone,"I told her. This is Rikanah," I said to her. A great large tiger 14ft in length, 5ft tall, with long fur the color of a tiger's. A great white main flowed with the breeze. He had a booshy tail witch flowed in the wind. He has the power of fire. And is able to engorge his "And finally this is Vapora. A young girl the seemed to be only 14years of age. She was warrior of the water element. Very peaceful in nature. her body was covered in the skin of a dolphin. She had webbed hands and feet. And on her head was three fins. she he had two on the side of her and a dolphin tail. looking into the future I knew there was more to come.
- by King Exseada |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/04/2009 |
- Skip
Comments (5 Comments)
- Role Play Heaven - 02/27/2011
- 5/5 interesting, misspellled words, but very interesting.
- Report As Spam
- King Exseada - 05/21/2010
- you know what? I gotta agree with you guys!
- Report As Spam
- King Exseada - 07/12/2009
- if you can please give me a little help! smile
- Report As Spam
- Tweekers_Coffee Addict - 07/08/2009
- it does have a good concept, but there's a lot of misspelled words. that wouldn't be too major if it was a bit more discriptive. you get...three stars.
- Report As Spam
- Princess of the Crows - 04/05/2009
- The writing is a bit rushed and it needs a bit more description. I give you four stars for an interesting concept. Still, it needs a lot of work in making it able to be read by others to understand.
- Report As Spam