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He left.
That was all my mind could comprehend at the moment.
After coming home to find his car gone, his clothes missing, and only one dog still remaining, my dog, I knew he had left. For good.
Well, he had run away again.
I walked through the empty apartment. I had never really taken the chance to look at it in the dark. Maybe that was my problem, I thought. I never really saw. I never really saw what he could do to me.
The apartment has never felt so cold.
I needed him back. And he hadn’t been gone that long.
I don’t know why I loved him so much. I wish I could understand his thoughts. Dissect him. But then, the mystery would fade.
He wouldn’t be Doom any more. He wouldn’t be the boy I fell in love with. I could almost reach out and touch him; his face was so clear in my mind. Angelic, beautiful, deep blue eyes that could dissect your thoughts before you could. Strong, high cheekbones and a beautiful widow’s peak that shaped his face into a perfect heart. Beautifully shaped lips, luscious and always a blessing to kiss.
And a soul innocent enough to break your heart.
True, in this case. Kind of ironic, too.
I should have known. I should’ve known.
Why couldn’t I see what he’d do to me?
I was stupid, I told myself, as I walked into the kitchen. The dark, dreary kitchen. It didn’t retain any warmth tonight. I was met with the icy black stare of the refrigerator. It was then that I noticed the note, scrawled in his sloppy calligraphy.
“Be safe.
Ich Liebe Dich.
~Doom”
- by unlovedtreehugger |
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- | Submitted on 04/17/2009 |
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- Title: Doom
- Artist: unlovedtreehugger
- Description: This is a monologue I wrote when I got bored. I don't know what I was thinking about at the time, only that I wanted it to be some sort of love story. And it is. I got an idea from a book I read (What Happened To Lani Garver - Carol Plum-Ucci) and it inspired me, so I ran with it.
- Date: 04/17/2009
- Tags: doom
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Comments (3 Comments)
- unlovedtreehugger - 04/21/2009
- haha. Thanks. Doom is actually a real guy I know. He just... doesn't know I write about him. *blushes*
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- ii-See-Stars-x - 04/19/2009
- round of applause! very nice. you've got good poetry :3
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- Machiavellian_Prince - 04/17/2009
- Beautiful. This is the kind of writing that inspires others. I sincerely hope that you make more works like this. 5/5
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