- I felt like I was drowning in a vast toxic pool of naivety. The fragrance of ignorance poisoned the air. I could’ve swore I heard immaturity snickering.
- Title: Lies Between Lines.
- Artist: b00_2
- Description: These are the first 3 sentences of my story. I posted this in the OS/P furum, but nobody read it. I'm desperate for feedback. It will only take 2 minutes or less of your life.
- Date: 05/09/2009
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- BlissfullSinner - 05/21/2009
- this is great so far continue continue please...
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- UC Poika - 05/11/2009
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What happens after that?
This reads like poetry!! - Report As Spam
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