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The sun was shining softly on a tree, the only tree in the bare field. The wind was billowing at the branches, causing a rustling. A young man lay at the bottom of the tree, looking at the sky. His spiky black hair was being blown around by the soft wind, and his bright red eyes were fixed on the brilliant blue sky. The young man's name is Roy Valeric.
A rustling could be heard, and a girl fell out of the tree and landed perfectly on her feet. She straightened up, and her short white dress was covered in grass stains. Her long hair was a silvery white, and her eyes were an electric blue. She smiled at Roy, who got up and held her close, kissing her softly. Angel blushed and giggled, but she heard more giggling.
A girl was laying in the grass, laughing at a man. She laughed loudly and got to her feet. She ran and laughed as he chased after her. Asyra's long glistening blue hair was waving in the breeze, and Sorean's laughter was easily heard.
The friends gathered together and sat down by the tree, laughing and talking. These friends are different to our friends. These friends are angels.
- by blehIfailsobad |
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- | Submitted on 05/24/2009 |
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- Title: Angels and Demons
- Artist: blehIfailsobad
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Description:
This is something I thought of in my spare time. Please, if you comment, tell me two things:
a)Do you like it?
b)How do I put another chapter if possible?
Vampires in the next chapter if there is a possibility of having one... - Date: 05/24/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- BrandonHaruno - 05/28/2009
- nice
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- Asyra04 - 05/26/2009
- Pretty good. (wait, I thought Angel was a guy?). I'm not sure how to add chapters, but if you do, I'd make each of them a bit longer. It seems like a great introduction, but I'd also add a description of Sorean.
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