- Juliette I'll be with you soon enough. I'm so so sorry. Tyler's words echo in my head ' Juliette wouldn't want this ' . Why haven't I hit the ground yet ? I hit the side of the cliff with my side. I can feel the rocks scratching my skin as I slide down. I start to roll and then I come to a complete stop. I'm on a rock. My eyes are closed so I can't tell if I'm at the bottom of the cliff or not. I open my eyes and look up. It looks like I fell about 30 feet. I try to turn so that I can see how much farther to the ground but when I go to roll I start falling again. I shut my eyes , waiting for the pain. I hit another rock this one stabs into me. I keep rolling the rock still in my side. And then I hit the ground. I can feel rocks stabbing into me. The pain is like nothing I have ever felt before. It is way worst. I can feel my thoughts slipping , It's over . I'm dieing.
- by Nanatsuiro-Rainbow |
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- | Submitted on 05/31/2009 |
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- Title: Another plan of murder ( p.5)
- Artist: Nanatsuiro-Rainbow
- Description: It's part 5 of " Another plan of murder ." It is in Melissa's point of view and it takes place right after she jumps. And this will be the last part of the whole series.
- Date: 05/31/2009
- Tags: another plan murder
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Akemi2000 - 06/10/2009
- people who commit suicide usually regret that decision when it is too late
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- Ethomara - 05/31/2009
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Nice description!! I like it but Melissa better not die!!!!! =)
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