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"Fine.", Jamie said, but if we're doing it we're doing it now. I refuse to wait two hours to do it because you say 1 a.m. is the magic time, ok?"
Squealing Stacey jumped up and down, "you're the best ever!!"
Having a ominous feeling that she was going to regret this Jamie grabbed the baby doll and a candle and walked alone into the bathroom, "Now tell me why I'm doing this alone again?"
"Come on you know I'm clausterphobic AND afraid of the dark, Jamie"
Rolling her eyes Jamie closed the door and placed the candle on the sink counter, she ripped the head off the plastic babydoll and placed it in the toilet and then the body into the bathtub half filled with water.
Thats when Jamie turned off the lights and her heart begand to pound, taking a deep breath jamie closed her eyes and began to spin slowly.
"Bloody Mary", Jamie had spun once.
"Bloody Mary." Jamie made another full circle, her heart was furiously beating and she felt terrified even though she knew it wasn't real, couldn't be real.
"BLOODY MARY!" Jamie yelled the name and heard a scream and the candle blew out, Jamie was left in the pitch black, she could hear scratching on the door outside the bathroom, and crying. Worried and frightened jamie turned the light on she screamed hysterically, there was a REAL babies head in the toilet and a REAL babies body in the tub, but that wasn't the worst part. The water was.. blood.. Jamie tore the door open and saw a grisley sight, her friend Stacey had been ripped open, slimey pinkish purple intestines and organs were gushing out of her body covered in blood, sick to her stomach Jamie fell over and gagged.
Stacey's eyes once lively and blue were like glass now, staring at Jamie in pure horror. Clawmarks crisscrossed on her arms and face, and thats when she heard the scratching.
scritch... scritch... scratch....
Jamie was breathing frantically, and jumped gasping in suprise when she heard the raspiest, creakiest, and most evil voice she had ever heard in her life.
"I know you're here.. Jamie... you woke me up and I want you. Oh come here little girl, I want to feast on your blood and devour your eyes..." a dark shadow was moving towards Jamie, all she could make out was disheveled hair and a ratty bloodstained white dress, she couldn't see Mary herself.
Scared jamie ran and hid in the closet, she couldn't get past Bloody Mary to the stairs. Thats when she heard the banging, like a cane being rapped on the floor to see where to go.
The banging on the floor was frightening, Jamie could feel it coarse through her whole body setting her on edge, she felt her chest tightening in terror. All she could think was, "Please dear God don't let her find me, please don't let her find me" As she huddled in the closet,silently sobbing so Mary wouldn't hear her, Jamie couldn't help reliving the the last horrifying minutes over and over again in her tormented mind.
"I found you little girl!" the evil voice rasped and the door was torn off the hinges, Jamie could see bleeding eyeless sockets stare at her. The last thing Jamie saw before she died was Bloody Mary reaching out with her razor-sharp clawed hands ripping her stomach out as she laughed manically.
- by Zombie Kebab |
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- | Submitted on 07/13/2009 |
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- Title: Don't Wake Mary
- Artist: Zombie Kebab
- Description: a short horror story written for a contest
- Date: 07/13/2009
- Tags: dont wake mary
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Oasaka - 10/19/2009
- I agree with Metal Nutmeg; I don't know if I'll sleep very well tonight. That was just... terrifying. I don't know when I last read such a frigtening and... GRAPHIC story. I mean; 'Stacey's eyes once lively and blue were like glass now, staring at Jamie in pure horror'. Scary, scary stuff. Bleak. Organs and intestines covered in blood. I am truley amazed anyone can actually write down stuff like that! You really pull the reader into the story. Wonderful job as a writer! 5/5
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- Voldemort is Sexy - 08/02/2009
- Hey if you liked this story thanks, I switched to this account from irish.
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- Metal nutmeg13 - 07/14/2009
- dude... i think i just had a heart atack. that was so real and...i dont think im going to bed tonight.
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