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Preface
I was staring at the computer screen, not knowing what to think. Reading the same words over and over again.... xXLocketXx... I.. I love you. I was about ready to beat the computer, my computer was old, it was made in 1985, so about more then 30 years. "Ok, Luna calm down." I told myself. "I bet the computers acting up again... ya ya!! Its acting up thats what its doing. I bet if i just shut it off, the real text will come up. I pressed the off button, the computer shut down. I booted it up again, waiting, leaning against my chair. Taping my finger tips on the desk, waiting for all the Spy Ware to load up again. I waited, every minute I got more nervous, what if it WASN'T the computer's malfunction, what if $Brave$ really typed that, and was really confessing to me? I put my face in my hands, trying to hide my eyes from the computer booting up back to the message screen.
Chapter One
Luna
"Hey Luna! I found this really cool new game!" My best friend Lauri squealed.
"Whats it called?" I asked, Lauri and I were video game geeks all the way to the end. "Its called.." Lauri started putting her index finger on her chin, trying to recall the name of the game. Her face was blank for a couple seconds, then she smiled and said "Its called Twister, the name may sound weird, but its a awesome game! You get to make your own house, make money and buy cool stuff for your avater, and alot more! You should try Luna." "Maybe" I said. Ding-dong-ding-dong. "Well its class time!" I announced to Lauri. "Awww, I was gonna tell you more about the game!" "Well not time to now!" I said quickly, trying to get away from Lauri so I didn't have to listen to all her talk about the new game. "Bye!" I called to Lauri and waved, Lauri waved back and turned to go into the other open door. I turned and went into the South Hall. Turning on my left, going straight, turning right, then stopping at Mr. Horris's Room, Number 145, I went left by Mr. Horris's lockers, went down to Number 32, I touched the lock, "564." I murmured so no one could hear, and opened the lock, I opened my bag and pulled out all my notebooks, and binders, I grabbed my Number 2 pencil, closed my bag, put it in the locker, closed the locker, and then , locked it. Checking the lock before I went into the class room.
Chapter Two
Luna
I tapped my pencil on the oak wood desk, waiting for my first period class too start, I glanced up at the clock, 5 minutes till class started, I opened my notebook and started to draw a Blue Bird, drawing the beak curved and drawing the loopy circle on the bird's chest. I drew the bird's talons curvy and colored in the tip of the talons black. "Alright class, now let's start." Mr. Horris announced. "Please open your Math Text Books to page 56. I sighed silently, I HATED Math. "Luna please come up and solve this problem." Mr. Horris said. I got up slowly and went up to the chalk board, I wrapped my hand around a piece of chalk and moved my hand up to the board. I stared at the problem. 57 divided by 173.. I quickly moved the numbers on the board around, one minute later.. "The answer is 3 remander 2." I said proudly, turning myself to walk back to my desk. "Very good Luna! Your progressing good this year!" Mr. Horris said happily. I put my hand on my scarf to loosen it, I was listening to Mr. Horris talk about 5 times 4=y+5 it was confusing. Then something touched my flip flop, I looked under my desk and saw a note, I picked up the note and opened it, "Nice one nerd." It was signed by the prep cheer leader in my glass, I turned my head to look at her and give her a glare, she smiled her evil smile at me. I gave her another second with my glare then turned around and started drawing the Blue Bird again. "Alright class, make sure you enjoy your Spring Break Vacation, and make sure to study." Mr. Horris told us all as the bell rang. I got up and grabbed my books and scurried out of the class room to the next.
- by Brassy Knit |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/18/2009 |
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- Title: Twister of Love
- Artist: Brassy Knit
- Description: just something i thought up =^-^= plz comment and rate nicely. ill finish chapters three- five some other time
- Date: 07/18/2009
- Tags: twister love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- evvethegreat - 08/11/2009
- this is really good, you have a lot of talent, i like how the preface pulls you into reading more.
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- izov - 07/19/2009
- it was very good, I like the plot line. But coming from a fellow writer you need to work on making new paragraphs when someone new talks. Thats about it, just a minor gammer error that a lot of poeple do. Keep up the good work though.
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- black_butterfly_maiden - 07/19/2009
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that was an easy math problem
and I luv it
But where's the next part
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