- clank! clank! the sound of armor being made was music to the blacksmiths ears. "hey!" said a teen with white hair and fire red eyes. "is my armor done?" "here you go." said the armory master."thanks." Cinder said. cinder turned around and walked out the door "AAAAAHHH!!!" a scream filled the air. two wolves came in from the back and bit the blacksmith on his neck. "hiya!" cinder took out his long ninja katana and slashed the wolf to the ground the other pounced at him but he stabbed it and threw it out the armory. the blacksmith was killed. so Cinder ran down th road across the pond and before he got to the old cave five imps attacked him each looked like mini goblins. Cinder slashed one but then the others jumped and hit him like a tidal wave. then he said fireball and killed three more. "where is the other one?" he said to himself breathless. "ouch!" it was on his back biting him. Cinder flipped it over and stabbed it. then he went int the cave. A.K.A. the wolf's den to be continued..... maybe! rofl
- by rikimaru10chu |
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- | Submitted on 07/29/2009 |
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- Title: fantasy world
- Artist: rikimaru10chu
- Description: something i made
- Date: 07/29/2009
- Tags: fantasy world
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Just_another_Ojama - 08/09/2009
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this is good but never bunch up dialgoue every time someone speaks it must be a new line.it works better that way
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- A Sexy Muffin - 08/05/2009
- ^^ i gave u 5 stars and hope u win something from this story smile
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