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JANA
Once apon a day there was a little girl named Jana. She was just 5 years old.She was as smart as a 7 and 8 year old and could talk very fluently. One day little Jana went to play outside and took her favorite little doll lulu with her. Then all of a sudden there was a car and in that car was a man and she thought he seemed interesting. So then Jana started to walk towards the man and then he rolled down his windows and said well heloo their missy,what are you doing on this side of the street all alone?Then Jana siad, Well first of all just came here to say hi and second my name isnt missy its Jana.Then the man siad yea yea wat ever.Then Jana said, Whats your name sir My name is umm umm is Tom yea my name is Tom. Why do you want to know? So i wont have to call you sir duhh. Well little girl.....My name is not little girl its Jana is it so hard to understand hello! Is only four letters see J-A-N-A- duhhhh!! Said Jana. Well any ways Janaa!! how old are you? Im 5 years old why? Because for a 5 year old you can talk!! I know everyone says that. Soo umm kidoo..I mean Jana which house do you live in? I live... (then all of a sudden Janas mom was calling her) Jana!! Where are you!! Ohh mommy!!! I'm over here!! then her mom said,Who are you talking to?! Ohh im just talking to a man. A Man What!! then her mother started running up the street then all of a sudden she herd a door open,a voice trying to screem, and then...tires screaching and she yelled out Jana!!! Jna answer mee now!! when she herd no answer and looked up she say the tire marks on the street and then she saw Janas doll Lulu and a wallet and she started to cry. Jana my poor baby where are you ahhhhhhh!! Help!! some one help!!!! and then a couple of people came to her that where sitting on their porch and said to her wats wrong? Have you seen Jana??!!! Yea we say her like 5 minutes ago and when we tured around we didnt see her and more. Jana!!!!!! said her mom The man in the car did you see him?? No the windows were dark. But how do you know it was a man? Because when i asked her who she was talking to she said a Man then i came running up the street and her a car door slam, a voice trying to scream, and tires screaching.... And then she wasnt there...Call the Police help please Help me fid her!!!!!!! He took her My daughter!!!! Noooooo!!!!!!!! THen she called the police and they were here in like 5 minutes
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- by dominicanchiq123 |
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- | Submitted on 08/03/2009 |
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- Title: Jana
- Artist: dominicanchiq123
- Description: This is just a sneek peek of my new storyy
- Date: 08/03/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- dominicanchiq123 - 05/28/2010
- yeaa im still editing it i knoww itss fruqqed upp pero im workin on itt
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- lil_fweshgansta_chick_224 - 08/03/2009
- wow loca dats a good sneek peek of the story dat is really good
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- dominicanchiq123 - 08/03/2009
- i hope u like this little sneek peek lol
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