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Maie's Village
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Shidom village
All the childern were playing,the mother's working in the fields of corn,the men doing anything they possibly can before they all leave,they say goodbye to their love one's. While maie looks at her boy friend playing with his brother,she has her baby sister on her back in the warm sack.
"cohi wake up...its time to walk"Maie told her little sister in the light voice lighter than water,Cohi only mubbled for some food,after a few minutes Cohi was walking "yes sister,come here!you can do it! cohi come to me!"Maie said in a playful voice,and cohi fell over on her and giggled with a smile "mai!"cohi said "thats right,i'm Maie!"and she did a rasberry on cohi's stomach and the little girl giggled
"hey Maie,you busy tonight?"Alpha asked his girlfriend,he was brownish red musclar teen,with a smile to die for,and his black mohawk shined in the sun,he was the cutest boy in the village so far."yes...i have to help mother with steaming the corn,i'm sorry"Maie said shyly and picked up her little sister and walked off "nah,its ok Maie,i just hope you get your grown up name soon,like i have"Alpha smiled and walked back to his siblings.They called him Alpha for a reason,he was the best at everything,fighting,fishing,hunting, and so on,he is like a Alpha Male in a wolf pack,he is even better than Maie's farther the Cheif of this great village named after Maie's dead mother Shidoma.
At noon there was yet another great feast,dancing and singing of their victory of the last war.
"hahahahaha!!"Maie laughed as she danced with Alpha,her farther sat on a cushion,and saw how happy his oldest daughter was,he had never seen her happy,yet he felt ashamed because he had made a vow to one of the other village's Cheif,here is what happened.
"goka! you betrayed me!!! why?!"Doino told Goka,(goka was Maie's farther) "i didn't mean it!!! i swear!!! how can i make it up to you?!!!"Goka pleaded
Doino paced back and forth and thought about his 8 year old son,and then Goka's 5 year old daughter....then he had the most selfish idea "when your daughter is 15 or 16,bring her here,to my son,to marry...that is how you will pay me,your genaration is strong and when Maie's and Dain's blood line crosses,it will be even stronger!!"Doino told Goka "but...but....."Goka sighed "yes...i will bring her here...but she will never understand....she will NEVER understand..."Goka said madly and left Doino's village with a sad face.
"She will be mad...."Somai told Goka,Somai was the mother of cohi and the new queen. "i know..i know....i will bring her to them in one year....one year...so she doesn't have to face alot of pain"Goka replied and looked at Alpha and Maie hug when the feast was over.
"see you tommorrow Maiy....hope you finaly get your name soon"Alpha said and then laughed,Maiy laughed with him "just go,big head! hahahaha,i will get mine tonight,i promise"Maiy laughed and walked away with cohi "by by alp!"cohi waved "ITS ALPHA!! little one"Alpha chuckled and went into his teepee.
~~End of part 1~~
~~part 2~~
Maie was weaving a basket while humming "i can't wait til it is my birthday....i wonder what my name is now...i'll go check with the elder"Maie said to herself and ran to the elder woman "whats my new name?! whats my new name?!"maie repeated while jumping up and down with her arms waving
"be quite,humming bird!"the elder snapped and walked into her house.Maie ran to Alpha's tee pee to find.... "oh my god!!!"she saw Alpha french kissing another girl beside herself.Alpha pulled away "maie it not what you!--"Alpha tried to say but maie ran off sobbing through the village and into her farther
"whats wrong my daughter?!"goka asked worried "ALPHA!!!"maie yelled and sobbed and ran off with her hands cover her face."who dares break my daughter's heart...."goka voice was not peaciful it was mad,he went to Alpha's tee pee and saw the boy sitting down tapping his foot,he was also angry.Goka lifted Alpha by the neck and said "who did you kiss?!!"his eyes burned red with fury,and Alpha struggled "some girl that liked me,kissed me and i tried to push her away but she didn't let go! i was gonna hit her but i can never hit girls!!!thats the truth i tell ya!!"Alpha choked and goka dropped him to the ground,and Alpha started coughing ".....ok..i believe you since you always tell the truth....what was the girl's name?"Goka asked
"sunflower.....thats her grown up name...."Alpha replied horsely.Sunflower had a talk with goka,he made her stay away from alpha intil she was 20.
"but!"Sunflower studdered "no but's! never mess with a man who loves someone else...it can cause...alot of pain...."Goka told sunflower who was crying,he walked back into his tee pee,and wondered where maie went.
~~~End of part 2~~~
Doino's army attacked Goka's village,and set fire to it all and took only the women and killed most of the men.
"DAN!! dan!! where are you?!!"Alpha yelled over all the din but before he could here his brother's call,a arrow shot him in the back and fell over dead,and the torched his body,with the rest of the village with goka inside it....they found maie,in her tee pee with her little sister curled up and shaking like a leaf
"please!! no don't take me!NOO!! don't kill my sister!!"she held on to cohi tightly,they knocked her to the ground and killed cohi "NOOo!!! ....."she started crying "....my sister......my family......dead.......all dead......"she sobbed and one of the men picked her up,she fainted.The army succeeded in killing her village and her people,and family,they came for what they wanted and got it.A tear from maie's eye slipped down her cheek and landed on the ground that she once called home,that she will never see again.
~~~End of the terrible night~~~
Maie woke up to see a man looking at her...he tried to touch her hair and she bit his hand,she looked around,it was a big room..she was sitted on a bed she moved backwards after the man said some words that she didn't know.She shook herself to see if she was dreaming,she finaly knew what he was saying. "are you ok?maie....are you ok?"The man asked again "NO!"she snapped "i'm not ok!! i just lost my freaken family!!!" she was wide eyed,she curled up in a ball and rocked back and forth.
Meanwhile,in Doino's war room.
"Are they talking?? or fighting??"Doino asked his gaurds.And waved for some wine to be brought in by a servant.
"we don't know yet.....but the girl is still sobbing because of us killing her village along with her whole family....in front of her own eyes....Dain killed her little sister...."One of the gaurds said with a sadden look the girl has pain....she will not marry that fool of a prince the gaurd thought.
"ah...oh well,she will just have to forgive him!By the way,Raren.....don't try to get her yourself since your also my son"Doino said gruffly and drink some wine and threw it in his own son's face,Raren spat out the truth "SHE WILL NEVER MARRY A FOOL LIKE DAIN FATHER!!!!i am sick and tired of you with the danm wine!!!And telling me order's!"Raren yelled and broke his sword with his knee and spat in his farther's face and left without another word.
Back in the room maie was in.
"........i want to go home...."maie pleaded softly "this is your home now...."Dain told maie yet again.He tried to calm her down but she spat curses at him,and kicked him in the face,his nose almost broke,but instead it was a bloody mess. "come any closer, and i break your neck....thats not a threat..it's a promise"Maie stared angrily at Dain and was ready to break his neck with her legs and bare feet. "leave me now...or you will never see the light again.."maie said with a frown.
~~End of part 3~~
Maie walked around her new home with diffrent clothes on.She wore a short skirt with slits to put daggers in,and handle a no sleeve shirt with straps in the back to hold a large bow and a quiver of arrows.Her hair was pulled back and she walked with sandals instead of mocasins.
"i disgust this place...."she mummered under her breath and practiced with her arrows at a tree with a target on it.She missed 5 times intil.
"here..hold it up like this.."Raren told her and lifted her arm up just alittle.Maie felt a specail connection when Raren touched her,and he felt the same.There eyes met,green into brown. "thank you....ummm..whats your name,if i may ask.."Maie said and still stared at Raren's green eyes "its Raren...but everyone calls me hunter."Raren said back and turned away from maie's gaze,he coughed "you should get back to practing"he coughed and walked cooly back towards the village.He liked her,you can tell that for sure,even though he did a cover up with a cough and such.
"what a weird nice guy..."Maie smiled and watched Raren turn and he glanced at maie once again,and went into Doino's tee pee.Maie shot more arrows and didn't miss even once,she always striked the target in the middle,because she was thinking of....Raren.
~~~End of part 4~~~.
"hahahahaha,your brother seems nice to me Raren...."Maie said while Raren wrapped her and him in some deer skin and sat by the fire. "nah,he just doing that so he can have you in his bed!He tricks women,he is selfish.But i am waaayy diffrent than him,i'm not selfish,i'm a born leader and so on....but only thing my farther sees is the younger brother."Raren sighed and threw some more wood in the fire.It sparked and made the form of a heart,just then maie told Raren something.
"i hope you know...i never miss a target because of you....i never lose a battle because of you...without you,I would be the soft garther i was before i came here...i think your more than a younger brother...."Maie said and kissed Raren on his cheek and rested on his shoulder. Little did they know Dain was watching and he was getting mighty angry,with his soon to be wife falling in love with his brother. How dare he?!Take my future wife?!!He must be killed or Banished! Dain thought as he watched,with a frown on his face.Suddenly Raren heard gaurds coming and he rushed in his tee pee away from Maie.
"there was no one else here!"Maie told the guards and lied.Dain came out from his hiding spot "she does not lie.....oh and one more thing,our wedding will begin in 4 week,tell farther that"Dain said with a smirk on his face,after the gaurds left he told maie what he knew about her and Raren."i know you want him,so i am going to banish him from this village,Tonight!Your mine understand that?Nobody else's...Not even Raren's,so stick with the program or i will get you pregnant in your sleep and you will HAVE to marry me.."Dain told her while checking her out. "is that a threat?!"Maie snapped "As someone i once heard,"it is not a threat..its a promise"Dain mocked and left for his farther's war tee pee.
~~End of part 5~~
"i'll miss you Raren...i don't want you to leave..."Maie pleaded as Raren started packing his things before leaving "i can't only spend a hour here...i'm sorry maie..."Raren explained "then please....spend it with me..."Maie begged and hugged Raren. Raren thought about it for a second and kissed maie,she kissed back because she loved him soo much.They fell over on to the ground.
~~~one hour later~~~
"i love you maie.."Raren said and kissed sleeping maie on the forehead and left with his clothes on and his two bags.If i would listened to my dad..me and her would not be in this sitation.... Raren thought as he went to maie's burned up village.
"....man i would be pissed off to if this was my village....eh..i gotta make a living here..."Raren said outloud and drops his things and made a campfire.
Meanwhile.
"let go of me!!"Maie yelled as the gaurds took her away and dropped her to the ground infront of Dain and Doino
"you betrayed us you impulsive girl!"Doino said while holding up a spear to maie's neck "go ahead! kill me!!i don't love your son!!!I rather die then marry him!!!"Maie held her head up strong and parted her hair while looking at Doino's war scars. this a** hole must of fought alot Maie thought "i won't kill you,since your still going to marry Dain.But if you have a child after 4 months of your marrige i will,banish you like i did Raren"Doino said and walked away with Dain. "i told you."Dain said under his breath. "Raren...be safe...please...."Maie cried softly and walked back to her and Dain's tee pee.
~~End of part 6~~
Maie wondered if how a life with dain would be,she just looked around her new home,whitch was not as new as she thought...it had everything her old home had,execpt the men always pushed the women around.Maie walked to the archery and..
"Hello humming bird"The man said with a grin "how did you know my name?"Maie asked with a steren look "i'm not dead ya know,ALP!"The man said with a laugh
"alpha?!! i thought you were....i saw you ..."Maie tried to say the last words "you saw them kill me? nah,they wounded me and sent me to work in this evil place"Alpha said and shuddered at the word "evil place" "soo.....now what since your not my girl no more,and i have seen you with that other guy"Alpha said and crossed his arms "i know one thing,i will be forced to marry Dain....i wish it was Raren"Maie told alpha and grabbed her bow & arrow."it will be alright,just pretend Dain is Raren,they look pretty simalar."Alpha suggested "no,Dain is ruthless and the oppsite of Raren!!"Maie sobbed and left with her weapon.
Meanwhile,Raren came back and begged to come back to his home,since he was wrong to flirt and love with maie.
"ok....but,if you are seen with her anymore....your a dead man"Doino said and made Raren leave."yes...father..."Raren mubbled he wished it wasn't true.Maie was standing by the door way,and soon as their eyes meet,they both sighed and walked their seprate ways.
~~~End part 7~~~
- by Dolly Akezai |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2009 |
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- Title: Maie
- Artist: Dolly Akezai
- Description: this is a story I did when i was about 8 or 11 ENJOY!!
- Date: 12/20/2009
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