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Chapter 5:
"What a perfect day today!" I sighed.
I picked up my book and started reading it. I didn't want anyone to ruin this perfect Saturday.
"Ring Ring Ring!" my cellphone cried.
"Crap." I muttered.
I picked up my cellphone and answerd it. It was Ichigo.
"Hi Ichigo!" I said happily.
"Hey, uh..Momoko? I need to tell you something." said Ichigo.
"Eww. You don't have a crush on me now, Ichigo?" I asked.
"MOMOKO!!" cried Ichigo.
"OW OW OW!! Stop trying to bust my eardrums!" I yelled.
"Just meet me at Kisuke's again." said Ichigo.
"For what?" I asked.
"I need to tell you something, didn't you catch that? That's the first thing I said to you." replied Ichigo.
"Okay, I'll meet you there!" I said.
I hung up, picked up my book and headed over to Kisuke's shop. I remembered the first time I was there, I was locked out and Kisuke helped me out. First, I made a pit stop home. I had to grab a jacket and dropped off my book home. After that stop, I headed back to Kisuke's shop. I admit, it gets scary at night. Who knows what'll come out at night. Also, before I headed back to Kisuke's shop, I grabbed a flashlight from my brother's room. I heard some strays, birds, and footsteps of other people.
"Almost there, almost there." I thought.
I kept walking. I felt a hand on my shoulder. I panicked and hit whoever it was with a flashlight.
"Momoko!!" growled someone.
the one I hit was Ichigo.
"Oops." I chucked nervously.
"'Oops' is the right word for you to say." muttered Ichigo.
"Sorry. Ichigo." I said.
"No sweat." said Ichigo.
to be continued....
- by DJ Animefangirl01 |
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- | Submitted on 01/09/2010 |
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- Title: Momoko, Soul Reaper/Chap.5
- Artist: DJ Animefangirl01
- Description: I took to long to think of ideas for this chapter.
- Date: 01/09/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- -Ringo Kusawara- - 01/10/2010
- Loved it! I bet Ichigo's thinking; "Why does all the bad things happen to me when I around this kid?!" 5/5
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- raeflower - 01/09/2010
- It was sort of choppy; it didn't flow well. I would add more transitions and descriptions. 4/5
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